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Jun 03, 2012 22:30


 Name: The Bitter One  **To be Retitled**
Fandom: Original
June 3nd 2012: They met once more
Rating: K+
Warnings: Minor swearing
Summary: Was she just imagining the rivalry that hada existed in high school, the bitterness and inferiority that she felt now?  Twenty years had passed, and Lea was certain that she had come out on top.

In the case when victory is bitter )

original: short story, original fiction

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brightechoes June 4 2012, 20:43:40 UTC
Love the situation, love how you interpreted the prompt, and love the dynamics between the two. I really enjoyed how you slipped into Lea's POV so fully, so that it wasn't until the end that we saw the reality of the situation, and how much she was trying to convince herself of her nonexistent happiness. Great job, and I'd like to read more about these two!

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lemontreeleaves June 4 2012, 22:48:52 UTC
Thank-you so much! I wasn't really sure what direction I was headed in before I was done writing it. I may being them back in the future; they were so much fun to write! :)

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