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Ficlet: Butterflies

Jul 16, 2010 04:11

Title: Butterflies
Author: lemondropseven
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Warnings: None
Theme:Love and Courtship
Prompt: Always a woman to me
Summary: Severus is nervous about his date with Harry.
A/N: This is for the Foreplay challenge on Severus Sighs. Snow asked for a nervous, cross-dressing Severus... I think she's trying to get me to ( Read more... )

harry potter, fic, prompt, fluff, snarry, pg, severus *sighs*, slash, severus snape

Comments 17

irockmysock July 16 2010, 08:42:21 UTC

I love crossdressing!Sev. Beautiful. think it could be expanded? :)

lemondropseven July 16 2010, 08:48:03 UTC

Thanks! I think this is the first time I've written crossdressing!Severus...hmm, I'm not sure actually. I write so many drabbles, they tend to blur together. But it was fun. XD

It was for a quick challenge of 100-500 words, so it probably won't be expanded. Sorry. :(

LD7

magalud July 16 2010, 08:48:45 UTC

Yes, I'd be speechless, too. Severus leaves nothing to chance. Poor Harry.

lemondropseven July 16 2010, 08:51:28 UTC

Heh, of course he doesn't. But I think it's more like lucky Harry. ;)

Thanks for reviewing. =)

LD7

julieannette July 16 2010, 08:54:35 UTC

I like how the nervousness turns into sexy confidence by the end.

"The butterflies were completely gone now, replaced by desire and a sense of power."
I love this line.

Nice fic. :) Cross-dressing Snape is one of my fave kinks.

lemondropseven July 16 2010, 09:05:02 UTC

Yeah, I think Severus is ultimately confident - he was just a little nervous. =)

Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it. I think I have to be in the mood for cross-dressing... snow caught me at a good time because I just recently watched To Wong Foo. XD

LD7

lyryk July 16 2010, 09:34:26 UTC

This is lovely! Crossdressing Severus ftw. Love Harry's reaction, and it's amazing that you could convey Severus's transition from nervousness to confidence in so few words. :-)

lemondropseven July 16 2010, 19:29:59 UTC

Thank you so much. I had fun with it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. XD

LD7

teas_me July 16 2010, 10:46:10 UTC

Lovely work! I think this is the first time I've come across crossdressing!Severus... I think i like it. Speechless, indeed!

I'd love to see artz of this!

lemondropseven July 16 2010, 19:32:06 UTC

Thank you! Crossdressing isn't a particular kink of mine, but I'll read/write/draw anything. *grin* Glad you like it.

If I didn't have too many art projects going on right now as it is, I would definitely draw it. But I have no time. :(

LD7

teas_me July 16 2010, 21:06:04 UTC

Well one of you fabulous artists should do it. What an image!