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lemonademelon

Fire and Gravity

Jun 15, 2011 02:28

Title: Fire and Gravity
Pairing: JaeChun
Genre: Romance
Rating: R
Length: One Shot
Warning: Implied sex
Disclaimer: I own DBSK, when I close my eyes.
Summary: Yoochun is like rain and he doesn't acknowledge the existence of gravity.

A/N: ( Read more... )

fanfic, dbsk, one-shot, soulmate

Comments 34

blueplue_hotaru June 14 2011, 20:20:18 UTC

gosh!
*glomps*
i love this!

lemonademelon June 15 2011, 03:52:19 UTC

really? thankyouuu for reading xD

chromaticwish June 14 2011, 20:25:41 UTC

I lovelovelove this. Beautiful writing and some of the lines in here are just ♥♥♥

I love this especially: “Surpassing limit means running towards the moon, while realizing there is still gravity to keep us down.”

fjaksdfjla; jfa;lds Lol, sorry, bit of a science nerd...

Beautiful♥

lemonademelon June 15 2011, 03:53:22 UTC

science nerd? xD don't worry, I like science too :3 haha thankyou so much for reading <33

tarwen_xoxo June 14 2011, 20:54:41 UTC

its sooooooooo beautiful~~
i love the ending (the last 2 the most!)

lemonademelon June 15 2011, 03:53:50 UTC

glad you did :D hehe thankyou for reading xD

odangeliik June 15 2011, 04:01:29 UTC

Ahhh I love this!!!<333 really really good and beautiful!!<33 "He let Yoochun fly high enough, but pulled him back to the ground with a warm embrace when Yoochun forgot the ground". i loved this phrase!!=D

lemonademelon June 15 2011, 04:05:52 UTC

hehe thankyou so much for reading! >///

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lemonademelon June 15 2011, 04:52:28 UTC

haha thanks Nha! :D