[12] light up my world

[lemon_skies]

light up my world
Pairing: Jonghyun x Key
Rating: pg
Word Count: 2823w
Summary: The school jock was known to be a big flirt, but Kibum couldn't help but like him. Just a bit. 
Notes:  Prompt from jongkeykink. It turned out much more fluffy than I intended. Much longer too. Warnings for homophobic school bullying. Also cheesy One Direction lyrics.

Comments

[shineeapple]

sequel would be nice though.heee;) i love it.awesome story<333

[lemon_skies]

I'll think about it! Thank you for reading ^^

[xxlexandrosxx]

Aah this is so cute~
Wonder how Jonghyun knew it was Kangdae who bullied Kibum, did he see?

Anyway, I loved it. You're a good writer.

[lemon_skies]

Jonghyun is popular, he hears things through the grapevine :)

Thank you for reading!

[kinkibum]

Aww, it is just like Key to be smitten with Jonghyun. The end was sweet <3

[lemon_skies]

Thanks you for reading!

[lemon_skies]

You are too kind :D

Thank you for reading! Fluffy stories come easier for me but I really enjoy darker stories. I was trying something different with this story in that I actually aimed for very little dialogue to make it almost seem like a series of recollections. Not sure how exactly effective it was but it was an interesting outcome!

I'm glad you like the intro, it's what I enjoyed the most from the entire story, setting up the different worlds the two boys live in. I initially had much darker plans for this story but in the end the fluff won out and kind of pushed its way through.

Again, thank you for this great comment ♥

[alize_bunny]

This warmed my heart. Oh the feels. I love reading these older fic and thenn seeing how much my babies have grown.