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crimson_miharu April 29 2011, 23:56:31 UTC
Well at least Yunho is agreeing to help Jae out even if he is...uncomfortable with him. It's sad that JAe is fully aware of what is going on with him and that he will die when the conditions of love and feeling are unmet.

As far as Rye and Chun...I don't think they should have love interest. I dunno just feel like it would take away from the focus of the story right now everything is about Jae and Yunho's development and I like that. ALthough I dont necessarily mind Chun and Su together...I dont really know who to pair Reyo up with >.<. Sorry I was absolutely no help .

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lemoluv22 April 30 2011, 01:04:06 UTC
Jae is a rather sad character but i think because of his life, it also makes him quite a strong one too [:

Oh and dont worry!! This was very great commentary/feedback ^^ I wasnt too sure but I agree with you when you say it will just take away from the story line ^-^ Thank you very much <3

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stage_persona April 30 2011, 02:06:06 UTC
I like your fic so much~

I... can't think of a love story for wookie and Chun

But I love how your storie is developing

good luck with your assignments

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lemoluv22 April 30 2011, 23:43:36 UTC
hahaha thank you very much!! ^^ i try hard but sometimes i dont think its good enough...

Ok for the Chun and Wookie thing, no big ^^ i wasnt thinking about doing anything with them but you know, just wondering haha thank you very much for your comment <3

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mizatvxq April 30 2011, 03:51:49 UTC
i'm glad that yun is opened up to jae.. Although it just cuddling and kissing.. Atleast jae is getting the attention and love that he need..
Chun n su can b 2gether.. But for just a little i think.. The whole focus is yunjae of course and i dont think adding the yoosu couple would do harm.. Beside yun and chun is bestfriend.. I think it would b okay..

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lemoluv22 April 30 2011, 23:44:52 UTC
Jaejoong will soon win over Yunho!! :D This is a happy ending ^-^ dont worry hahaha thank you very much for the input, im considering them but not too sure [: Thank you for the comment as well <3

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jjluf April 30 2011, 04:17:27 UTC
Yay~! Finally some Yunjae <3! I really like where this is going~ I hope Yunnie will open up to Jae even more.. they are so cute! I hope Yunho stays this way..i mean how could he go back to being mean to such an adorable fee?? Thanks for the update!

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lemoluv22 April 30 2011, 23:45:35 UTC
Oh no!! Thank you for this lovely comment, it really makes my hours typing this up worth it <3 <3 Thank you again!

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yozora_yume April 30 2011, 06:59:13 UTC
oh I like Yunho's character already, he's the righteous, caring kind right?

thanks for the update hun, I'm actually quite glad that they didn't have sex, and instead, cuddled to sleep. its a lot endearing :)

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lemoluv22 April 30 2011, 23:46:40 UTC
really?? I originally had them having sex and i thought about it and was like... nahhhh this is WAY better but i failed at trying to keep this all nc-17 xD haha aw well, im very glad you liked it! <3 Thank you for the support!

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