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Jun 08, 2008 15:43

Title: The White Room (1/1)

Rating: PG

Characters: Doctor/Jack, Erica

Spoilers: None

Summary: ' “What's that sound?” The girl next to him asked, the noise stealing her attention.

The Doctor gave her a sad smile, “I'll introduce you when he stops crying. It's less intimidating that way,” he paused, looking wistful, “And it'd be a dent in his ( Read more... )

Comments 11

chipswiththat June 8 2008, 21:32:07 UTC

Yay! :D

Sorry for forcing the plotbunny upon you, but this is most definitily amazing.

Yeah, it is rather annoying when people write Jack like nothing happened, same with the Doctor. They both have serious issues, emotionally, and yet words that have really dark connotations are thrown around as if they are completely meaningless. It saddens me.

But huzzah for insane!Jack.

lemmiki June 8 2008, 21:49:57 UTC

Yeah, it really is annoying. I hate it, HATE it, when authors make the Team's pain seem greater than Jack's. Jack Leaving vs. Getting Torture for a year, having the guilt of almost causing the end of the world on your head, and having the one person you look up to, admire, and love, call you wrong. I wonder, which one's worse?

adafrog June 8 2008, 21:49:31 UTC

Poor Jack. But I'm glad the Doctor is taking responsibility for him.

lemmiki June 8 2008, 21:51:43 UTC

It seems right that the Doctor would be the one to take care of him when Jack snapped. Thanks for reading. <3

kensieg June 8 2008, 22:21:38 UTC

Couldn't the Doctor sedate Jack? Otherwise I loved your story.

lemmiki June 9 2008, 17:33:28 UTC

I guess, but wouldn't change it much, would it? (And for me, the Doctors still trying to treat Jack like a person instead of a vegetable) >.> Oh well. ^///^ Thanks for reading! <3

kensieg June 9 2008, 17:41:43 UTC

It might be better for Jack's body.

baker_evadne June 9 2008, 10:12:48 UTC

I like the whole Jack being human thing. Too often he's portrayed as all knowing and invincible. Good to see that he can be shown as human too.

lemmiki June 9 2008, 17:34:44 UTC

Yeah, I hate it when he's written like nothing can affect him. D;

Thanks for reading! <3

your story purplekitty1981 August 3 2008, 06:04:11 UTC

is there going to be more???this is so sweet!!!

Re: your story lemmiki August 3 2008, 16:40:18 UTC

Thanks! >///< I don't know, I might if I find some more inspiration.