Bread and Apple

[lelaelle]

Who: R'en and Laelle
Where: Lakeside
What: Laelle shares her meager excuse for dinner and R'en shares some thoughts on the week he's had.

Comments

[jarvais]

Kudos particularly for the scarf and apple bit in the beginning. Sparing and effective, stark and bright, touching for no reason - these are inanimate objects! Very strong imagery.

[mastervain]

"I have a look?" Laelle asks, turning just enough to catch a glimpse of him. "Do you say wrong things so often?"

I so empathize. ^^