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SPN; And You Say Life is Bitter Sweet (PG)

Aug 18, 2011 00:36

Oh good lord, what have I done lol. This is my first attempt at writing anything Supernatural related, after having marathoned all 6 seasons and read various fanfics myself. I wrote this a day after watching the S5 ending. So pleeease, please forgive any mis-characterization as it's my first time writing for this series. D:

( As it is, he just wants to be alone right now. )

series: supernatural, #g/pg

Comments 3

alesh101 August 19 2011, 05:26:24 UTC

Awww, Dean! The loss and hopelessness really comes through.

SPN fic is a little intimidating, isn't it? I just did my first, as well. Don't worry, I think you did very well.

hitzusin August 19 2011, 05:48:50 UTC

IT IS. I waffled over whether or not to post this for awhile but since I post whenever I write something, I just had to. Even after watching all 6 seasons I'm still a little iffy on the characterization, and the last thing I want to do is be horribly ooc with it.

Thank you so much. (｡◕‿◕｡)

sauce_gay October 30 2011, 08:21:01 UTC

And for a split second his indifferent facade cracks, unable to stop the suddenness of it, hand slamming against the wheel repeatedly, whuffing out a soft breath and sucking it back in as he regains control of himself and white knuckles the wheel again to keep driving.

This bit. Right here. It's what got me. Hearing the pain in his head is one thing, but seeing him lose control is a whole different ballgame and it's what breaks my heart every single fucking time.