Summer (Logan/Veronica) (15/23) NC-17

[leiseman04]

A/N: This chapter really doesn't have much to do with the plot, it's mostly smut.  If you aren't interested in that, then simply read to the first break and you should be covered on on any of the plot line advanced in this story.  For everyone else...enjoy!

Chap 15 - I Can’t Give You Anything But Love

After Veronica had finished debriefing Dick, a.k

Comments

[afrocurl]

That was a relly tender, and really hot scene between Logan and Veronica.

I think that given everything you've created in this world, this chapter really fit. They've had plenty of time to be together, but never alone.

[cts_punkin]

Loved it... I love this little AU that you've created with everyone working together.... Can't wait for the rest...

[leiseman04]

I'm glad that everyone is enjoying it. I realize that television is good because they keep the viewers tuned in by not realizing the storylines that we all would like to see, but there are times that I just think that shows are too frustrating for viewers; writers/producers continually don't give us what we want because we won't come back for more. We viewers live for conflict, and Logan/Veronica is a major one for this series. That said, I do feel like if the two communicated more, my AU would be achievable.

Personally, I think the worst show that 'held out' on its viewers was West Wing and the Josh/Donna storyline. Josh/Donna fans only got a little and it was at the very end...I like that VM's Rob Thomas at least gives us great moments with Logan/Veronica. Best example is speeding through the summer of Logan/Veronica love to show us that she is with Duncan at the end of the first episode in Season 2.

And that, folks, is my rant. Thanks for listening.

[sitebuilderchic]

This is awesomeness. Great job (the LoVe scene was hot!)

[rindee]

So glad Dick didn't have to be Han Solo. (Hee.) This was good - I've been enjoying the series since you started. One small suggestion: Veronica wandering down memory lane about all the guys she's kissed, in the midst of macking on Logan, was a bit distracting for the reader, and I'm not sure Veronica would be thinking of all the other guys at that particular moment.

I really liked the early part of the dinner when Veronica and Logan were reminiscing about cookouts on the beach when they were still part of the fab four. I love this part especially: it was part of their past - something that would always be with them. “Um hmm. Now we can make new memories,” For me, their shared past is part of why they work as a couple. I like that you honored it. And - Billie Holiday. Cool.

[perfect__weapon]

Holy Crap!
I found this story a couple of days ago and I finally finished reading all the chapters. It is magnificent. Very well written, funny, adorable, just fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Billie Holiday = Love.