Out of the basic plot points, most of it. The overall 'ah ha' moment, still working on. The biggest challenge is fleshing things out. I usually have a good idea what I want to write in the chapter and while I'm writing it the fullness works it self in.
That was great and kinda funny. i love your writing and i love the fact that it is continued in a variety of chapters. Keep up the good work. PS: btw when r u gonna post more chapters?
Thanks for the feedback. I'm procrastinating a little, but I will probably have the next chapter up by tomorrow or early Friday. We're right in the middle of moving from Chicago to Ohio and it seems to be a little overwhelming at the moment. Again, thanks for reading!
awww...Dick is so cute! i want to take him home with me! and I'm sure he'd like to come home with me, because I work at B&BW. All the lotion he wants, baby.
Speaking of "baby", can I just mention that it kinda bothers me that Logan keeps using that word. I don't think he's ever "baby"ed anyone. he says things like "sugarpuss" and "sweetie". I think he might even say "shnookums". but that's just my opinion. ^_^
i remember he called veronica 'baby' in one of her flash backs in ep 2.01 and i hate'd it then....thought i'd put that out there coz i know what you mean XX
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and I'm sure he'd like to come home with me, because I work at B&BW. All the lotion he wants, baby.
Speaking of "baby", can I just mention that it kinda bothers me that Logan keeps using that word. I don't think he's ever "baby"ed anyone. he says things like "sugarpuss" and "sweetie". I think he might even say "shnookums". but that's just my opinion.
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cheers.
--Lex
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