you are my sweetest downfall [1/1]

[leira17]

title: you are my sweetest downfall
author: leira17
ships: liam/zayn (some louis/harry, but nothing that wouldn't be passed off as 'bromance' irl)
rating: nc-17
word count: ~6000
warnings: mentioned drug use (marijuana)
summary: The way Zayn laughed was kind of ridiculous, but Liam would be lying if he said it wasn’t his favourite sound in the

Comments

[sumaku13]

All the tears. I really love stories that have a healthy progression that is visible but also subtle and underlying. I like how you've touched on aspects of the past, linked them to the present and tied it into a forward looking perspective - it really helps to enliven the already volatile atmosphere surrounding their hectic lives.
I also liked the characterisation of Liam and Zayn, in how they just work off each other and it's natural and it's unknown but they just work.
“No, I think,” he said, swallowing hard, “I think I’d always end up shagging you, in any universe, you know? No matter what.” - Liam's swallowing hard is almost like his acceptance of the level of intimacy of his interaction and also the ramifications of his actions; sometimes when you're so intertwined with someone it can make important things (like Sex) lose it's 'value' and I think this line highlights Liam's recognition of this

[shoreparty]

Oh, man. First of all, they are an easy ship to write because they are the best ship ^_^

Thank you writing this. Thank you for capturing everything I love about these two, the comfort, the maturity, the slight push and pull between each of their serious/silly sides. I was just aching by the end. Like I want this! I want this love!, for me, for them, for all of us.

“No, I think,” he said, swallowing hard, “I think I’d always end up shagging you, in any universe, you know? No matter what.” HURHGHHJ. MY HEART.

“I don’t think you could ever be terrible people, Li.” NOR YOU, ZAYN. I think this one was my favourite.

And I was so waiting for a McDonald's scene, yessssss. And this reads so genuinely funny, yet sweet and wistful. And we live in the same city. Just. Sorry. I'm a little incoherent.

[influira]

wow, just. exquisite. i don't even know what to say. love it.

[anonymous]

Oh my god, this is possibly the best Ziam fic I have read ;~; I love how you captured the Ziam dynamic so naturally and so so beautifully. This is how I think they would be irl if their relationship was canon imo and you are amazing! Please do write more Ziam because you're just so damn good at it.

I love Zayn/Liam fics from Liam's perspective because he's so awks and adorable and omg the sex was so hot and cute at the same time if that's even possible?

It seemed like Liam wasn’t winning this battle, so he groaned and sat up, petulantly keeping Zayn on his lap. And this was just so cute because it'd be such a Liam thing to do.

Also this, this killed me: “No, I think,” he said, swallowing hard, “I think I’d always end up shagging you, in any universe, you know? No matter what.”

“And they say romance is dead,” Zayn said.

I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU!

[thesilverwitch]

i loved this! really sweet and just plain adorable~