moving to mars [5/5]

[leira17]

title: moving to mars
author: leira17
ships: liam/louis (liam/harry, louis/zayn, niall/food)
rating: pg-15
word count: ~17,000
warnings: swearing, references to sex, other than that it’s pretty tame
summary: The one in which Liam and Louis travelled through time and space together. Sort of.
note: i accidentally 17k lilo fic. beta'd by my lovely laurencake

Comments

[shrdmdnssftw]

I would just like to say that this is possibly the best AU I've read recently. I absolutely adore your characterisations of the boys, and Niall was definitely a favourite of mine here.

Being a DW fan, I absolutely loved Liam's "old eyes" and how Louis was a companion. I also love Harry the popstar and Zayn the producer and the fact that no one really knows what Niall does!

In general, I loved the aches that this gave my heart when Liam didn't realise that Louis was in love with him, and when Liam was missing Louis except he didn't know why. And Liam's jealousy of Zayn that he didn't quite understand - that killed me. This is just so wonderful and brilliant and I'm probably going to read this a million and one times over, because it's just that good.

I had hearts in my eyes for basically this entire thing. You are a fantastic writer and your ideas are brilliant and I'm going to go now and read pretty much anything of yours that I can find.

Again, this was so, so good!

[silverwings2020]

I wish I could come up with something more constructive than "I hate you and the feels you give me", because that's about all I've got right now, aside from al;dkjfl;akjdl;zkjflzksdjf. I'm just going to go and weep over shipper feels my life choices now.

[mowglimoonshado]

This is the best thing ever! I got totally over-invested and I was flailing at my screen and biting my nails and rolling around on my bed in despair at the boys obliviousness but I enjoyed every second of this. Liam was adorable and the way he fell in love with Louis without even realizing it was so well done, normally I'd find that aggravating but their dynamic was such that it worked. I'm really glad all of the boys were able to stay friends, that made it the happiest of endings for me.

[quietgalaxy]

This fic is amazing. I'm so glad I had time to read it before I left.

It's hilarious and everyone's nice and I just really really like this. Sorry, I'm a bit incoherent now, and I have to go pack. But, seriously, wonderful job. :)

[badjujuboo]

loved this. LOVED THIS SO MUCH I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO EXPRESS HOW MUCH! harry and liam's easy relationship, louis getting all jealous over not being the one Liam has a big gay freakout over - OH IT WAS ALL PERFECT!