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leionai

cynosura (oneshot)

Aug 25, 2013 01:44

cynosura

chen!centric + chen/lay
pg-13. ~5500w
angst. romance. fantasy. fluff. character study. (angel!au)
prompt: fallen angel, chen, monster (big bang)

Cynosura. To humans it is the Polaris, the brightest star of the Ursa Minor. To the Hierarchy of Angels, it is the doorway between Heaven and Earth.

author's notes: because there's a lack of ( Read more... )

au: cynosura, genre: angst, genre: character study, pairing: chen/lay, genre: romance, fandom: exo, genre: fantasy, member: jongdae/chen, length: oneshot

Comments 16

pretend_parties August 25 2013, 08:46:39 UTC

Spot. I am screaming in my head right now.

Omg this is O_o

I'll be back after calming down

leionai August 27 2013, 13:19:33 UTC

ahaha take your time ^^

pretend_parties August 27 2013, 16:38:24 UTC

hey! im back. apologies for the lateness. real life stuff

okay so firstly i just wanna thank you for writing this lovely piece \o/ i enjoyed it so much!
the thing is, i have a sorta fetish for all things magical and angels and fallen angels and all that stuff so this fic is like my guilty pleasure. (kind of? sort of?) OTL im not making much sense am i?

i see niinja!KaiSoo there lmao xD i wonder what deadly sin he committed though, being fallen and all. oh wait! he fell in love with a mortal didnt he? from what luhan and baek said. (lol i can totally see those two as little devils) but then again, angels arent supposed to fall for one another too so maybe im just imagining the KaiSoo?

&&& LayChen!!! such adorable boys :) omg you and your snark jongdae hahaha priceless. and yes you're such a good looking person <3 ( ... )

leionai August 27 2013, 18:21:46 UTC

it's cool, don't worry bout it ^^

n'aw thank you so much! haven't written for like three years so i'm glad you enjoyed it!
oh i know what you mean, i love angels too haha

kaisoo, hmm, that's the mystery isn't it? we'll see... maybe haha and luhan and baek are perfect for these evil roles haha

chenchen is just too fun to write about

virtual cookies for those who can guess who these elders are haha

aw thank you for reading and commenting! :")

zhonqda August 25 2013, 21:55:20 UTC

SPOT. WILL BE BACK TO READ THIS LATER.

leionai August 27 2013, 13:20:00 UTC

hi, take your time :)

zhonqda September 10 2013, 06:20:54 UTC

I TOOK MY TIME AND I READ THIS OH MY GOD IS THAT SHINHWA IN THE BACKGROUND OH MY GOD THIS FIC DESERVES CAPSLOCK OH MY GOD THIS IS GORGEOUS AND BOA THANK YOU FOR MAKING CHEN HUMAN SO HE AND YIXING CAN FINALLY BE TOGETHER AND I LOVE LOVE HOW YOU FORESHADOWED THE AMERICANO AND HOW YIXING ASKED AROUND FOR CHEN AND HOW HE SUSPECTED CHEN ISN'T REALLY FROM THIS WORLD AND HOW HE GOT SURPRISED WHEN HE SEES KIM JONGDAE WORKING IN 3.6.5 [AHA! I LIKE THAT CAFE NAME] I THOUGHT THAT YOUR ENDING WAS FITTING BECAUSE WITH THE PERSONALITY YOU GAVE CHEN, OF HOW HE BECAME SO SCARED AFTER MEETING LUHAN AND BAEK [SERIOUSLY YIXING HUZZAH YOU ARE SO BRAVE TO TAKE THE INITIATIVE AWESOMESAUCE DFDFGDFGD] HE WOULDN'T HAVE PURSUED YIXING EVEN IF HE LIKED HIM. I ALSO SPOTTED KAISOO AND MAKING KAI A FALLEN ANGEL SOBS SO HE FELL IN LOVE WITH KYUNGSOO AND HENCE GET CONDEMNED WHILE KYUNGSOO REMAIN LONELY FOR AN ETERNITY SO THIS TIME ROUND SHINHWA DECIDED TO GIVE CHEN AND LAY A CHANCE? SO MAKING JONGDAE FORGET ALL HIS MEMORIES SO THAT THEY CAN START FRESH [AND HIS ( ... )

leionai September 11 2013, 21:03:36 UTC

Helloo, welcome back! haha and yess it is Shinhwa! Ok wow, that voice in my head was shouting while I read this and you noticed those tiny details? I didn't even realise I wrote some of those hahaha Chen's sass is just, we all need it! As for KaiSoo welll... maybe I should write their sidestory? Depends...

Either way, thank you for reading and commenting! N'aw, you're sweet <3

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yuilhan August 27 2013, 12:24:59 UTC

this is so cute and precious and???? ugfhdfsj chenlay is so great
angel!au fics can sometimes be difficult to write in my opinion, but this was absolutely wonderful !! ;u; ugh the cafe and yixing and the way you described the angel city and the elders and wow

thIS IS SO CUTE THOUGH SERIOUSL Y

thanks for writing such a wonderful fic omg

leionai August 27 2013, 13:22:21 UTC

ikr? i love chenlay haha
tell me about it :/ i got lost halfway through writing this... aw thank you!

aw :")
no, thank you for reading (and commenting)!

offlying_turtle April 6 2014, 22:01:22 UTC

Idk how I found this or why I found this so late but omfg, I love this. Like a lot.
angel chen is just so freaking precious and laychen is just beautiful.
And I freaking love you for putting in shinhwa here because it's rare and I freaking adore them.
thank you for writing this beautiful fic, definitely memming this ♥

leionai May 5 2014, 20:08:42 UTC

So I really need to check my LJ more often because hey, hi! Thank you for reading! Sorry for the super late reply, I didn't even think anyone will find or read this but no, thank /you/ (and yay Shinhwa!) ^-^