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Feb 13, 2008 02:18



His touch burned her and at the same time made her ache for more. She shouldn’t be doing this. She should step away from him and leave. Hell, she should’ve never even talked to him in the first place. But instead, she found herself kissing him back with urgency.

This wasn’t supposed to happen. She had certainly not planned it and she was ( Read more... )

2007movie, transformers, snapshots, judy/starscream, fanfiction

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jigsaws231 February 13 2008, 07:36:13 UTC
Nice - I have a hard time seeing Starscream caring for anyone this much, but I like the way you wrote it and made it a possibility. The last line was delicious.

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leilani666 February 13 2008, 11:02:02 UTC
Thanks for pointing that out to me. I was supposed to say at the beginning that this was written through Judy's POV, but I was too sleepy to remember doing that. My bad and I'll fix that now. Sorry for that.

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ceralennox February 13 2008, 20:40:41 UTC
This is amazing...just wow. Probably the best (and only) Judy pairing that I really really like XD Keep up the good work. Characters were very much IC, and the last line was simply delicious XD. Keep writing more, please XDD

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leilani666 February 19 2008, 05:25:47 UTC
Hehehe :3 I'm glad you liked it. I try to keep them as IC as possible for me, even with the cracky plot I've got going. Hopefully by the end of my little fics they'll still resemble the originals at least a bit. If not, you have permission to kick some sense back into me. XP

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