Fan-fic: Interference chapter 8/?

[leikvin]

Author: leikvin
Category: AU
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows, Veronica Donovan, Nika Volek, Nurse Katie, Charles Westmoreland, Paul Kellerman, Frank Tancredi
Genres: Romance, drama, angst
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Warnings: Work in progress
Word count:  3072
Summary: Michael is in the airport on his way to Colorado on a business

Comments

[lizparker6]

Aaaaah, very nice)!

I loved michaels honesty with sara, now at least, there is this 'clean sleight' between them. ;)

I hope you have some sweet cute flirty kissy butterflies-in-stomach moments for us in store before you switch to angst once again, lol, but as I already said, very good job done with this story and I really look forward to reading more! :)

[leikvin]

I hope you have some sweet cute flirty kissy butterflies-in-stomach moments for us in store before you switch to angst once again, lol,
Hee hee.... that was actually the intension...but we'll see if I can deliver. I keep changing my original outline, so we'll see what it ends up with!! ;)

[pbaddict4va]

INA!!! Oh man .... i thought she was totally give him the fuck you and walk off but i am glad that he gave a chance to explain himself and that now... she is going to go skiing with him!!! MUUAHAHAHHAA that is so awesome .. i love it!!!!! More Ina!! We need more chappies... and if in the next chapter some budding love can happen ... even better!! EEEEEE!!!!! yay!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

*hugs*

[leikvin]

Awww... Jackie! You're so sweet! Reviewing here and there and everywhere...:)
Yeah, it would probably have been more realistic, if she'd given him the finger and walked off. But I guess Mr.Scofield was just too tempting...;) (Who can really blame her..??)
I'm working on the skilesson as we speek. And budding love...?? Hm...we'll see about that!
Thanks Jaquita!! :D

[leikvin]

BTW: Bought the first Twilight-book today.... That it was probably a huge mistake.. I don't have time for more addictions...;)

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[naija2600]

iiih, det bliver bare bedre og bedre for hver gang !!
Det var et fantastisk godt kapitel! :D Og der var meget misa med! :D Jeg kan ikke vente, til du får skrevet det næste kapitel! :D
- Laura (:

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[leikvin]

Hej Laura! Tak skal du ha! Kapitlet skulle egentlig have dækket meget mere, men jeg blev enig med mig selv om at det måske var bedre at dele det op i to mindre kapitler...
Er godt igang med det næste, men hverdagen har været lidt for stresset den sidste uge til at få skrevet noget. Håber jeg blir færdig med det til weekenden. :)

[pbaddict4va]

Ooo i love the christmas tree theme .. I love it!!!

But i wonder why review looks like a coupon down there.. hehe

but YAY!!!

[leikvin]

All of my incoming comments are 'screened'. I think that means that it's only the poster and me, who can read the comment until I have read and 'unscreened' it. As long as I haven't unscreened a comment, it looks like a coupon...
I don't know why it's become like this. I probably messed up with the 'comment-options' somehow, and I haven't found out how to get rid of it....

BTW: BIIIIIIIG HUG for you, sis! Love the icon!!

[anonymous]

Yesterday I read "Interference" and I really enjoyed it! It gave me so much fun! My favorite moment is the flirt at the airport - Sara was wonderful. However your story is complicated I can't wait for happy ending (after some more chapters of course;). I understand also that when something is about Misa it can't be easy (PB writers get used me to it). But maybe we deserve for romantic scene - Sara Michael and supper by a fire-place at her cabin in the valley...
Dorota:)

[leikvin]

Hey Dorota!
Thank you so much for your lovely reply! It's been a while since I've worked on this puppy, but life has been busy during the last month, and the little time I've got left has been spent on my latest obsession with the Twilight books...
But reviews like this are so encouraging, so I think I'll have to get working on my next chappie again now!
I agree; the PB writers tends to give MiSa a rough time, and in general we definitely need some more romantic MiSa-scenes. :) I like your idea about a cozy, romantic dinner in front of the fire-place! Unfortunately we've got a great deal of storyline to cover before that. But I hope you'll stick with me. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so don't worry. The fire-place scene will come!! Ina :-)