Creative powers, activate?

[leigh57]

Okay, I give. I gotta kickstart the brain somehow if I want to get the Santa fics finished (which I do), so here we go. From the more-versatile-than-I-can-ever-hope-to-be

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[leigh57]

The one where Jack and Renee are nearing the end of their date and Jack is thinking about whether or not he should kiss her. (that wouldn't fit in the subject line box) For adrenalin211His conversational skills are so rusty that when their server appears by the table and says, "I'm sorry to interrupt sir, but we'll be closing in five minutes," he has to glance at his watch to convince himself that three hours have evaporated

[adrenalin211]

OMG!!

OMG!

Okay. Now that I can be coherent. Well. A little MORE coherent, at least.

The most awesomest bestest part of this thing is how you show (not tell) that Jack is so damn comfortable with her that like.. time disappears and he gets so easily distracted and GOD. They're just so CUTE.

It's SNOWING and she says she's not ready for the night to be over and he all cutely agrees but he knows he won't be able to stop himself from kissing her because she's just so wonderful, and you can TELL in his headspace just how wonderful he thinks she IS and just. JUST. a;ldskfjas;dlfkjas. I mean for serious.

I want to read part two of this, if you ever want to write it. The time when he kisses her and we get to see how she reacts and all that stuff. G;lakdfjas;ldfkas

IN FACT. I would swap out either of my existing prompts in order to prompt part II of this.

[leigh57]

Dashing to gym, so more later, but two things:

1. ILU
2. Okay, I will do part II before either of the other ones. Deal. And I'm not going to spend the entire time I'm working out thinking about that a tall. Not even a little bit. It's not what I'm going to do. Not what I will do ever for a second. DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M SAYING?'

[leigh57]

Blagh, my rust, let me show you it (well I just did). But in any case, you're pretty easy, so I'll try not to get too stressed out;)

I made it snowing for you AND because suddenly I could see snow in my head so yeah, there you go. Also, thanks you to I spent the entire time in the gym thinking of yet another part of AU pillowfort land. We are such complete and total dorks. And if this makes you happy, it can't be that bad. onlyitprobablytotallycanbutiwilltrynottothinkaboutthat

[adrenalin211]

First. ILU2.

Second... WELL GODDAMN. I'm so wonderful at prompting, I guess, that I just make Jack and Renee distract you for an entire workout. That takes mad skillz man. I love me. And there's no one I'd rather be a complete DORK with. JUST SAYIN'.

I LOVE THAT ICON.

P.S. I am only made happy by wonderful fic.

[leigh57]

p.s. I just realized that this ficlet says, "It's snowing outside." As opposed to you know. Those times when it snows inside.

*headdeskslam*

[adrenalin211]

Well I didn't notice that at all! BUT, people say that all the time. Like. "It's nice outside." or "It's raining out." I mean obviously it's not that it can be raining IN. But people say that anyway.

So I think it works for headspace, is what I'm saying. I find that my thoughts constantly redundant, and that's not even the kind I'd pick up on.

SNOW, says youre icon. There's too much snow here. 1-3 inches my ASS. I'm glad it's here now that I don't have to drive in it anymore though.

[marinw]

That's lovely. The date they never had in canon. *wibbles*

[leigh57]

*wibbles with you*

Aw, thank you. As we are all pretty well aware now, I could write the dates they did not have in canon until the end of time. Mainly because uh, they didn't have any dates in canon;)

[marinw]

No that I think about it, finding the time in between seizures to hunt down Tony The Zombie TOTALLY COUNTS as a date!

[leigh57]

In Jack's twisted brain, that was probably the best date EVER;)

[century_fox]

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG HAJKHFKJJKDSHGSIUGHDSJKHAJKFHAJ THIS IS THE LITERARY EQUIVALENT OF A PAINTING I WANT TO FRAME AND HANG IN MY LIVING ROOM IT'S SO ADORABLE AND PERFECT SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE FLAILING FOREVER

but why would you make decaf though

[leigh57]

Hoosh, you are so sweet about the insane rustiness of my writing! *hugs* Thank you so much though, and I'm really glad you liked it. You know me -- I could (and probably will) just write these two forever.

And clearly she has to make decaf because they'll already be so hopped by the idea of making mad sex all night long!

[century_fox]

Your icon is making me feel ALL THE FEELINGS ASJKFHASJKFAHS I think I need to steal that one at once. :D And you're welcome!!! (and clearly, insane rustiness has no effect on the amazingness of everything you write!) And I hope you do write them forever! ♥

Okay, fine. Fair point. :P

[leigh57]

I love that icon; I cannot lie. I'm not supposed to say that because it's mine, but she looks so HAPPY there, and that look on her face brings me neverending delight. I get mad at that ep for a lot of reasons (duh), but one of the more minor ones is that lots of caps I would like to icon are too dark or weirdly shadowed or something, and I lack the skill to fix it.

Which is way more than you ever wanted to know about me and icons. Ahem sorry. LOL.

[adrenalin211]

RIGHT?!