Comments | leigh57: Fic: hiding my heart away

leigh57

Fic: hiding my heart away

Jan 01, 2012 20:52

fandom: BSG
characters: lee adama, kara thrace
title: hiding my heart away
word count: 850
warnings: uh, sexual situations? Sorta?
a/n: This is for siricerasi. The complete list of prompts is here. All fail, canon or otherwise, is mine and mine alone. Not exactly my area of expertise, yikes! Thanks to adrenalin211 for the super fast read-through ( Read more... )

fic from santa, my adventures in cooking, bsg, fanfic

Comments 36

adrenalin211 January 3 2012, 21:47:55 UTC

Some of the fandoms we've had to write in for this Christmas fic thing are CRACKING ME UP. Like... you just wrote Kara/Lee. I can't get over that. Hahahaha. But it's GOOD. It's them. Very much. And you don't even like them at all. So. That's super awesome of you.

kissing Lee is something like striking a match when you didn’t realize you were surrounded by lighter fluid. --I think that's so...them. And I love the analogy. Also, there's nothing explicable about it.

she’s not stupid enough to mistake this feeling for arousal.-- I love that you went there. Because THAT is Kara, in a nutshell. She'd just be like "well, frak" and roll her eyes and then deal with the shame and touch herself like Madonna only it's not that fun.

but it’s worth every future wince to see the admiration in Lee’s eyes.-- I can see this whole thing happening. Like really clearly. And your description of the gym and how it's just dirty underneath "waiting to pounce" is really really really awesomely vivid. (do you like my reallys ( ... )

leigh57 January 4 2012, 00:01:23 UTC

Dude, you wrote Boyd/Ava. Which makes this look like child's play on the hard-o-meter, believe me! You could do this no problem, I promise. I mean as you said, I'm like the last person to write Kara/Lee! Eh, it's fun to experiment every now and then though, right? I'm still so terrified of writing you your Roslin/Adama because I'M NOT WORTHY. I'm so not worthy.

Anyway. Thank you! I'm glad you think it's Kara, because I did try to get into her headspace, fucked up though it is:) ♥

siricerasi February 16 2012, 19:53:50 UTC

omg I've been an LJ FAIL recently.

This is lovely and Kara is perfect =)

And she lets him pay.

Love this line.

Hope you had a great new years/christmas etc!

leigh57 February 16 2012, 21:03:35 UTC

LOL, no worries at all. When you gave me this prompt I was like, "Guh, what?" and all freaked out because it's a show I'm terrified of writing. But I had a really good time with it and I'm glad you don't think I screwed it up. Thanks so much for the comment, and I hope your holidays were peaceful and awesome:)