Comments | leichenwasser: Nothing Fails, no pairing, PG-13, 6/?

leichenwasser

Nothing Fails, no pairing, PG-13, 6/?

Mar 09, 2012 01:04

Title: Nothing Fails
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: None
Summary: Anis and his adopted son Tom live a quiet life after turbulent pasts, and are content with that. When Tom's old case worker begs them to give another misguided soul a chance, they give in - and soon realize they may have bitten off more than they could chew.
Author's Notes: Thanks for all ( Read more... )

Comments 5

kseenaa March 9 2012, 23:08:20 UTC

Awww... Natalie. :-) I hope she'll turn out to be a really good friend to Bill. He needs one. Between Bushido, Tom and Natalie, I hope Bill can discover himself. It appears to me that he has tried so hard so long to mold himself to whatever everyone else wants him to be that he has lost himself in the process. Wow. I don't know if you realize this, but you have written a darkfic. In disguise. ;-) Much psychology here to ponder, if you dare see it... Don't know if that was intentionally, but I see it anyway. You have done a really, REALLY good job with this. I ADORE THIS STORY! And I hope you'll keep up with it, because I am SERIOUSLY hooked. *fangirl-mood*

sashimi_salad March 9 2012, 23:38:08 UTC

Awww... I adore the hero-worshipping :) I hope Tom doesn't inadvertently put his foot in his mouth some time and hurt this boy's feelings :)

I'm loving how Bill seems to be adjusting. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

zeph317toho March 10 2012, 21:54:59 UTC

I hope Natalie turns out to be a true friend to Bill. He really needs one! Well, you know, there's Tom, but I'm not sure if hero worship is exactly what Bill needs. When our heroes let us down, it's worse than anything. Not saying that Tom will do that -- at least, I hope not. Bushido continues to be a sweetheart. I love Bill's idea with the apples. Really, I just love this whole thing. <3

fyredancer March 12 2012, 04:47:44 UTC

Bill is soooo adorable, poor baby. So cute, puppying all over Tom. I have this awful sense of foreboding! But they're still so cute together.

*waits for the other shoe to drop*

zuzana899 June 14 2012, 17:06:10 UTC

Dein Deutsch ist sehr gut. Hat Dir damit deine Oma geholfen? :)

I am glad that things are going smoothly for Bill. New friend, new family that cares about him. It is strange to read about Bill as a child and about Tom as his big brother. Your Bill is really fragile. You described him as a little child, mentally younger than 16, at least it is my feeling, all the things that happened to him had a big influence on him. And it is just so nice to see that someone is calling him kiddo, encouraging him and is worrying about his wellbeing.... I think it's time to say I hope you will finish this story. ;)