Nothing Fails, no pairing, PG-13, 5/?

[leichenwasser]

Title: Nothing Fails
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: None
Summary: Anis and his adopted son Tom live a quiet life after turbulent pasts, and are content with that. When Tom's old case worker begs them to give another misguided soul a chance, they give in - and soon realize they may have bitten off more than they could chew.
Author's Notes: Thanks for all

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[fyredancer]

.~. Toooooooom. Bad Tom.

[leichenwasser]

/smacks him on the wrist and buries all his picks in the backyard

>:(

[kseenaa]

Aww, Tom... You bad boy. I guess one have to take into consideration what Tom has been through to of course, but still... Bad you, Tom!

At least he figured out he might have gone a little far. And now, I bet, Bill will be even more submissive and obliging around Tom. Which is... not all together a good thing.

And Bushido made me lol! X-D Bad food only? How the hell can he keep looking the way he does then? *grins*

[leichenwasser]

No, not altogether a good thing... but maybe not a bad thing, either! They can have an understanding! They have insight!

Two words. SEXY. MAGIC.

[kseenaa]

One can hope so. :-) Tough love... I grew up on it. It does make you a better human being. I am convinced off it.

And man, Bushido need to share said sexy magic, because I have serious need of it daily. :-P

[sashimi_salad]

Hehehehe! Two in one day! I love it!

I love how they're bonding! Tom and his brand of tough love :)

[leichenwasser]

Hahaha, didn't even realize!

Yup! Things can only get better from here <3

[zeph317toho]

I don't blame Tom for being suspicious because he's been there and probably has seen a lot of conniving people take advantage of others. But, after his little harsh speech, maybe he'll eventually be convinced that Bill isn't lying?

Bill’s suspicions -- and the fact that he even has to have suspicions of where Tom is taking him -- were so sad. Tom's defensive because of what he thinks might happen; Bill's accepting of whatever is done to him because it's already happened. I just want to adopt him and cuddle him.

Maybe loving with the dog will help. Dogs are excellent friends. I just can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

Also, if it's true that food preservatives will keep you young forever, I'm gonna look flawless when I keel over from a french fry-induced heart attack.

[leichenwasser]

I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS have I mentioned that lately

Ugh how do you understand my characters so well?? It's really awesome, you analyze them effortlessly and flawlessly, you have a grip on all the major players! It's like you're in my head fcbgskhbc

OMG FRENCH FRIES, YES, YAY

[zeph317toho]

So, I'm in your head, eh? I really love what you've done with the place. Nice touch with the carpeting; it's very plush. ;)

I'm flattered that you think I'm good at analyzing, but honestly, it's all you, babe. You write such vivid, well-rounded characters, they leap off the page. You are so excellent at showing your characters with such layers and personality. Even when I want to smack them, it's only because they are so real. That's all talent from you.

If it's okay, I'll just stay here in your head for a while. Don't be afraid if you get phantom smells of fries and pizza. I'll try not to make a mess!

[zuzana899]

Tom will be a good older brother, I know it. They just need time to know each other better. And I am sure that Tom will be a big help for Bill - he will show him how a normal healthy teenager should live - with McDonalds :D.

No, seriously. Tom has his own past and is carefull about his trust, that is pretty normal. That he can't choose words better, is normal too, he is young, he doesn't Anis's experiences. But I can see his good hearth very clearly, Bill and Tom will have a great relationship and Tom will be the best overprotective brother Bill could ever have.

Poor boy, he is trying so hard to have a family.

I love your characters.