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B2MEM: With Bow and Blade

Mar 16, 2006 10:57

Rebirth

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Filth. Blood. Gore.

The stuff drenched him until he no longer knew where the grime ended and he began. So long as he fought, he lived. Nock, draw, release. He glanced up, a foul darkness covered the sky where the sun should be or had blood marred his vision? Unsheathe, parry, thrust - his blade found its way home again ( Read more... )

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martal0712 March 19 2006, 18:30:12 UTC

I always have such a hard time "buying" elven telepathy. Even in Tolkien it usually strikes me as a cheap device and out-of-character for Middle-earth. The height of chutzpah, I know1 And that's my own personal reaction, nothing to do with your writing. But I mention it to say that this piece overcame my prejudice against said telepathy, and then some. It's a very nice connection between the two characters, and seemed completely believable for both of them.