I'm continuing to work through some edits, most of which aren't so bad. But I'm finding a discerning need to line edit as I go, and I'm trying to get out of the habit. Honestly, the prose is fine. (Or so I tell myself).
A few things I've noticed, now that I've had some space and distance from Witch Eyes.
1) I usually consider dialogue one of my
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