Potpourri (5/?)
Title: Potpourri (5/?)
Pairing(s): DooWoon, JunWoon
Rating: PG-13+
Word Count: 2,000+ maybe
Summary: He never said, “no,” and because he never said, “no,” they never stopped. Because you never say “no” to hyung.
( Doojoon’s visage melted and unclenched as he stared at the rising waters forming at the corners of his lover’s glossy, beer-bottle-brown orbs. )
Pairing(s): DooWoon, JunWoon
Rating: PG-13+
Word Count: 2,000+ maybe
Summary: He never said, “no,” and because he never said, “no,” they never stopped. Because you never say “no” to hyung.
( Doojoon’s visage melted and unclenched as he stared at the rising waters forming at the corners of his lover’s glossy, beer-bottle-brown orbs. )
Comments 2
But, somehow, I like how it ends. Because it's not a happy ending but yet I think they can't have their happy ending. I like all the junwoon moments. I like the idea of them being together and how Junhyung changed for Dongwoon, how he stopped smoking because the maknae simply asked him to.
I can't help but to hate Doojoon. He's hurting Dongwoon, it's oh so wrong.
So yes, the way you ended this part is - at least, for me - a good way to end this series. Maybe Dongwoon will find his happiness, maybe not. Maybe Junhyung and him won't stay together but..
I'm sorry I didn't comment on the other chapters but I did read all of them ^^
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