November 18th

May 05, 2012 23:55


Title: November 18th
Pairing(s): DongSeob
Rating: PG+
Word Count: 2548
Summary: An aircraft crashes with only BEAST onboard. Unfortunately, two survived.
A/N: Deaths. A fairly short and concentrated piece. I hope it's received well. <3

They say you can't live three days without water. )

pairing: yoseob/dongwoon, fanfiction, rating: pg

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3star4life May 6 2012, 05:21:03 UTC
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Wae Wae Wae!!!! ;~~~~~~~~~~~;

BB this hurts my heart so...but needless to say, the writing is just wonderful and the story is brilliant.

As Dongwoon says, they're angels now.

Good job BB! and i took the first spot! yay! hehe

I hope you're feeling better as well BB. You usually don't write stuff so depressing so I hope you are feeling better.

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leggymimi May 6 2012, 18:48:31 UTC
>________________< this plot has been on my conscious like a bunny gnawing on a helpless carrot... grr, I am sorry for it being so sad and hopeless. But they are angels. I like that outcome~ ummmmuuuu, I'm glad you liked it in spite of everything being blues-y. One day I will have the first spot of something of yours. And that smut......... smfh. <333333 please wait for a coherent reply from me.

thank you for always being so damned sweet. Being in a depressed mood sometimes lead to depressing pieces like these that are good, but I would like to write something happy~ and I will get on that. :B

<33333333333333333

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3star4life May 6 2012, 20:22:11 UTC
I know how you feel BB; i have so many plots dancing around my head but I just haven't sat down with them yet >_<

and BB I'm workin' on something for ya...I just hope I don't procrastinate on it or get distracted O_O hehe

and no problem BB! lol yeah I saw you wrote on the wrong spot XD lmao it's okay BB once someone saved me a spot but I got so excited i started a brand new comment O_O hehe but I will get back to work now!

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leggymimi May 6 2012, 18:40:38 UTC
NOW I FEEL BAD. cause... cause I was gonna dedicate this to you, but then I was like noe, she forgot about me probably.... u____u UGH I NEVER LISTEN TO MY GUT. NEVERNEVERNEVER. I WILL MAKE YOU SOMETHING HAPPIER~~~ because that lovely fic of yours that i have read probably twenty times makes my heart want to cave in on itself. oh missy, and I would like you to know that I am half way done with TTC5~~ syummer is coming and I have said to hell with calculus, so I can write faster. :DDDD ( ... )

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leggymimi May 9 2012, 01:09:17 UTC
YUS. IT ISSSSS. Because I remember that glorious dongseob you wrote~ So I was like, "owe~ She likes dongseob?" So I wrote this, although it is sad.....~ So yes, bb, this is yours~~ ('B BUT I WILL STILL WRITE ANOTHER. *gasp* I am? :D:D:D:D:D I find that surprising~~

No. Nope, don't even care. I'm writing SOMETHING for you. I just hate that my idiot father bleached our computer along with that dongseob smut, man... I could've finished that for you. *sighsigh* I will have SOMETHING for you, so your refusal is futile. :) And MISTAKES? HUN FORGET THE MISTAKES. I FUCKING LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT. <333333333 NOPE DON'T EVEN CARE. DON'T. EVEN. CARE. u____u I hate being being busyyyy. But I still try to get stuff out on here for you guys... I really love dongseob, I really do. I love the idea of Seobie being older than Woon, but Woon being bigger, and Seobie being so cuuute~ <3 I want to write them more. I promise to... I like naughty!dongseob, though~~ hurm....~~~~ <3 ( ... )

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badoy May 6 2012, 06:33:40 UTC
i'm scared of nov18th now. ㅜㅜ ㅜㅜ ㅜㅜ ㅜㅜ ㅜㅜ ㅜㅜ

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leggymimi May 6 2012, 18:28:19 UTC
I AM SORRY.

IF ANYTHING HAPPENS TO THEM THE MONTH OF NOVEMBER I WILL CRUCIFY MYSELF.

<33333333333333

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leejaehwa7 May 6 2012, 06:46:11 UTC
OMG…this is like TT_TT *cries buckets ( ... )

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badoy May 6 2012, 09:43:42 UTC
i'm sorry for butting in but my tears... i have to control them from falling because mother's sitting beside me. *gives you a hug*

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leejaehwa7 May 6 2012, 18:18:32 UTC
It's okay...*receives hug*...don't cry because of me though...and thank you <3

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leggymimi May 9 2012, 01:27:58 UTC
Okay, so I want to kill myself. Really. WHAT WAS THE ODDS OF THESE DATES LINING UP WITH YOUR INTIMATE STORY? HELLA HIGH, AND I STILL--KJLDFJDFSD. BB I AM TERRIBLY, TERRIBLY SORRY. UGH. I did not mean to make you think of such unhappy things on purpose. You see, I WAS gonna call this May 19th -- another unfortunate day in my book -- but then the 19th is approaching, and I figured it would rub some people the wrong way and freak them out. And I didn't want that, so I chose 11/18 because of another unfortunate occurence. ): *feels bad ( ... )

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dongwoonieee May 6 2012, 08:51:48 UTC
this is depressing ;~; so sad...
but this is great piece~ i like how it flows :D

November 23rd
Yoseob wishes to die.

November 24th
Yoseob dies.
i don't know why, but i really like this part. it's especially amazing, gave me goose bumps.

if you don't mind me asking, why november 18th, though? the date is so specific, makes me a bit scared tbh :P

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leggymimi May 6 2012, 18:26:55 UTC
I try to make it happy, even when there is death involved. :c there is peace knowing they are together~~~

Oh and that last little bit you liked? Its especially my favorite too because its just like boom...boom. dead. No more suffering. Precise. No long, drawn out little anecdote or whatever. Yoseob gets his wish, and now he is with his Woonie and the others. Happy, happy.

Um, why 11/18? Well, it was a day -- for me -- that split me in half. My heart, everything. It was a bad and eye opening day, so that's kind of how that ties into this. It was just a horrible day overall. I'M SORRY FOR SCARING YOU. I almost posted it as May 19th, another day that, in retrospect, was doomed to be a bad day, but that was waaaay too close a date, and if anything happened to our babies I would just........ ugh.

<333333333333333333 thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. They will be okay~~

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dongwoonieee May 7 2012, 09:50:15 UTC
True though, it's better for all of them to be together :')

Ah, I see.. I'm sorry to hear that you had to experience such a horrible day :( I hope that that day doesn't have too much of an effect on you until today... If you ever want to talk about it, I'm here :] I'm not very good at giving advice, but lots of people say that I'm a good listener ^^; Just if you ever need someone to talk too, about anything ^^

You're very welcome :) Thanks for writing this :D

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