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leftygirl02

Push - Chapter Five

Nov 01, 2009 18:07

Title: Push
Fandom: Camp Rock
Genre: Alternate Universe Drama/Literary Fiction
Rating: PG-13, maybe higher (for language, implied violence and intense/possibly scary situations)
Information: Most performers can’t fathom not performing, no matter what demons may stand in their way. Sometimes they just need a little push.

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Comments 6

pricelessone November 2 2009, 01:54:56 UTC

Aw! Naate! Really? I need more of him! Especially when he's little like that.

leftygirl02 November 2 2009, 05:31:39 UTC

*does best attempt at a salute* Yes, ma'am! Oh and thank you for encouraging the little flashback here. I had been trying to come up with a good place for it to happen, but didn't realize here until our phone conversation.

lovewrite November 2 2009, 15:25:16 UTC

Oh NO. Michie, what have you done? This is going to be very, very bad, because there's no WAY she's going to be able to keep this lie up all summer, and when she's found out, it isn't going to be pretty.

The flashback was great and definitely piqued my curiosity. Makes me wonder if whatever happened back then has any bearing on what's wrong with Nate now.

And what in the world was Shane thinking?? Seriously, this dude is so full of himself it makes me want to vomit. Yes, let's just skip out on your obligations and take a nap? I hope he gets some just desserts from Brown, who is striking me as someone you do not want to cross - even if he doles out the punishment with a smile and a charming English accent. lol

leftygirl02 November 2 2009, 17:16:22 UTC

Oh Mitchie, you silly girl indeed. So glad you enjoyed the flashback; it snuck itself in there nearly at the last moment. Gotta stark peeling back those layers, eh? And oh Shane; he really just doesn't learn right away. Too much hair product me thinks. Brown is fierce; he knows and cares for these boys, so has to intervene.

nannerz2cool November 3 2009, 19:46:18 UTC

I loved the flashback. Oh, who am I kidding, I'm just intrigued by guys with problems. ;) Now, I think someone should swing by Tonia's NaNo novel and comment. :) http://pricelessone.livejournal.com/522585.html & http://pricelessone.livejournal.com/523236.html

leftygirl02 November 3 2009, 23:48:02 UTC

Who isn't intrigued by guys with problems? Thanks for the links; just added reading and commenting to them to my 'to do' list for tomorrow. :)