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lefaym

Fic: Journey

Jul 16, 2010 09:36

Title: Journey
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jack/alonso, myfic, torchwood, doctor who, myfic: 500 beta

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jo02 July 16 2010, 00:43:04 UTC

This is beautifully painful !

lefaym July 16 2010, 00:50:35 UTC

Thank you.

WARNING: CAPSLOCK heddychaa July 16 2010, 00:54:45 UTC

THIS IS EVERYTHING I LOVE IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD AND I JUST WANT TO HUG IT AND SNUGGLE IT AND GIVE IT KISSES.

Seriously, though. It's so tender, and sweet, and understated, and yes yes yes.

♥ Be mine ♥

Re: WARNING: CAPSLOCK lefaym July 16 2010, 00:58:23 UTC

HEE, THANK YOU. :)

Seriously, I'm really glad you like it and that all the understatedness came across.

rm July 16 2010, 01:01:45 UTC

This is really good. Difficult. Elegant. I like that, that they're both kinda messed up people, but they're both graceful and nearly nonchalant about it. Jack's responses are all really decent without being that usual pantomime of charming he does. And I pretty much always have all the love for Alonso ever.

lefaym July 16 2010, 01:10:37 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad that Jack seemed to be working outside of his usual mold without seeming OOC. And who doesn't love Alonso? :)

(Actually, probably better not to answer that. :P)

withywindle01 July 16 2010, 01:06:43 UTC

I once swore I would never read any Jack/Alonso, as much as I do like the character. But I'm glad I made an exception for this one. I think you characterized them perfectly.

lefaym July 16 2010, 01:11:14 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you took a chance on it and that it worked for you!

azn_jack_fiend July 16 2010, 01:13:14 UTC

This was wonderful. I loved how Alonso was so intuitive.

lefaym July 16 2010, 01:14:40 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm glad that came across, because I wanted to use Alonso's inuition as a counterpoint to Jack's supposed psychic abilities.