A hot chapter and a new delightful character that I already like!! This was a lovely reward for the end of a long day :-) I can't wait (but will patiently) for Harry to meeting the snake in the box and see what he has to say about Severus' softer side .
Somewhere in the kitchen was an unopened box hissing ~stupid dead mouse~. - great chapter ending!
Your scene in the first half of this chapter with Severus and Harry and chocolate was even hotter than the rough sex at the chapter's end. I had to go back and read that part twice! **fans self**
I had forgotten about Harry's need for Ron's Quidditch comforting. I think it must be time to go back and start reading from the top. Definately not a hardship! There is probably so much I am forgetting about.
Thanx for updating! This makes my week. Take care.
Hey, none critical question. You seem to be talking about sperm and penis' in a more romance novel way. "Seed", and Sev's "sex". Any particular reason?
Elewyiss
PS I am waiting not patiently for the next chapter.
No reason for the switch over, it usually depends on my mood. I can't tell you how many times I sit and stare at the computer because I don't feel like using the word balls and can't remember how to spell sac in that reference,or come up with a better word. lol Sometimes I just want it sounding less harsh I suppose. ???? How's that for a non-answer. :) At least I Had Ron cussing up a storm. *grin*
I'm glad you're not being patient. :D I'm writing a lot! This one didn't make you wait toooo long I hope. Bribe? *hands over Girl Scout cookies*
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Your scene in the first half of this chapter with Severus and Harry and chocolate was even hotter than the rough sex at the chapter's end. I had to go back and read that part twice! **fans self**
I had forgotten about Harry's need for Ron's Quidditch comforting. I think it must be time to go back and start reading from the top. Definately not a hardship! There is probably so much I am forgetting about.
Thanx for updating! This makes my week. Take care.
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Elewyiss
PS I am waiting not patiently for the next chapter.
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No reason for the switch over, it usually depends on my mood. I can't tell you how many times I sit and stare at the computer because I don't feel like using the word balls and can't remember how to spell sac in that reference,or come up with a better word. lol Sometimes I just want it sounding less harsh I suppose. ???? How's that for a non-answer. :) At least I Had Ron cussing up a storm. *grin*
I'm glad you're not being patient. :D I'm writing a lot! This one didn't make you wait toooo long I hope. Bribe? *hands over Girl Scout cookies*
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