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leelee2005

Fic: The Change

Jul 11, 2007 18:17

Title: The Change
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Timeline: Between 403 and 405
Summary: The day Justin gets his hair shaved Brian doesn't realize it right away just how much he's going to miss the blond locks.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, they belong to Cowlip.
Beta: Many thanks to the lovely camelhaircoat.
Feedback: Please let me know what you think.

( The Change )

my fic, qaf

Comments 46

lilia81 July 11 2007, 17:15:27 UTC

Great job, I love it!
Megint sikerült tökéletesen eltalálnod a karaktereket és az akkori kapcsolatukat! Azt ahogy Brian érez a Pink Posse-val kapcsolatban, de mégis hagyja hogy Justin azt tegyen amit akar.

És tetszett ahogy Brian talált magának másik hajat :p
"he was just resting his arm on Justin's hip" ez annyira Brian :D

leelee2005 July 14 2007, 19:40:06 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Azt ahogy Brian érez a Pink Posse-val kapcsolatban, de mégis hagyja hogy Justin azt tegyen amit akar.

Nekem mindig is tetszett Brian-ben hogy nem akarja irányítani Justin-t hanem tiszteletben tartja a döntéseit, kvázi egyenrangú félként kezeli.

És tetszett ahogy Brian talált magának másik hajat :p

Igazából ez a rész inspirálta az egész ficet. ;)

claddagh_girl July 11 2007, 17:23:03 UTC

I think my heart is actually melting inside my chest.
I REALLY loved that! Well done.

leelee2005 July 15 2007, 06:10:11 UTC

I think my heart is actually melting inside my chest.

Awww. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

zaipixie July 11 2007, 18:35:00 UTC

Oh. That was so sweet!

Thank you so much!

leelee2005 July 15 2007, 06:12:10 UTC

Thank YOU for taking your time to read and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

kari77 July 11 2007, 19:23:27 UTC

That was wonderful and sweet and a perfect coverage of that time. Just loved it.

Thank you for sharing it. :-)

leelee2005 July 15 2007, 06:13:24 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

the change bijou16 July 11 2007, 20:00:36 UTC

hi leelee,
that was great. i loved it. for brian to realize how much he loved justins hair and that he actually missed it when it wasn't there was very revealing. and almost admitting he liked to cuddle and have gentle sex once in a while too. not just rough and hard.
it was beautiful,
teresa

Re: the change leelee2005 July 15 2007, 06:15:33 UTC

Hi Teresa,
Thank you for the lovely feedback. I'm glad you liked it.
leelee