All crimes should be treasured if they bring thee pleasure somehow...

[leecherous]

Title: Accept This
Author: Nihilism
Rating: PG for drug abuse.
Pairing: St. Jimmy/Jesus of Suburbia
Disclaimer: The characters represented herein are copyright Green Day and I have no claim to them.
Notes & Summary: Written for the first writing exercise at qeverything, and I liked it enough to post. Jimmy overdoses, and living through it is not his only

Comments

[lostingreen]

This was raw, intense, and emotional. The mood you set with your writing was fantastic. I really got a sense of desolation and nihilism from your words. I love how dark and gritty the characters are in this as well.

This stray who is attached, maybe unwillingly, to the patron saint of passive aggression, searching him for a light long since extinguished.

God, I love that line. The imagery of Jesus as a stray makes sense and is oh-so-lovely. And the description of Jimmy as the 'patron saint of passive agression' was wonderful to.

Overall, this was amazingly written. Awesome work. :)

[leecherous]

That's definitely what I was aiming for, so I'm glad it game across. This is placed pretty early into the story, in my head, so Jesus is still the suburban kid that doesn't have any idea what he's gotten himself into, hence the 'stray' description. Following the wrong person home and all that. Thank you very much!

[suebot]

I'm havinh a masive brain fart at the moment from the over tieredness of everything so I'm just gonna say that I loved this.
Short and to the point.

[leecherous]

I'm glad you loved it, and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know, too.

[billievsfink]

This is what I get for not checking. Holy shit, I'm in love with these two.

Sigh. And I love it even more because without PB form, it's my OTP.

[leecherous]

Yes, well, you know. Me too. Mmmm.