Those Forsaken Ch. 8

[leeayre]

Title: Those Forsaken
Rating: M
Genre: Angst/Horror
Characters: Subaru, Seishirou, Kamui, Fuuma
Summary: It all started when Subaru accidentally brought one home. Now Kamui and Subaru find themselves running for their lives, wrapped up in a fight neither could have foreseen.
Warnings: Vampirism, blood, physical abuse, nondescript nudity, etc.
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Comments

[rose_erato]

Subaru is one stubborn boy ^_^ I love the way Seishirou only wants Subaru to bit him (he's so possessive!) and I found the whole interaction pretty hot. This is a wonderful chapter to read.

[leeayre]

*grins* I wonder though if Seishirou has really thought this all the way through? He's got to feed two people now! :D It gives a whole new meaning to "bringing home the dinner..." XD

[ruthk]

The story is gorgeous and you have the characters, Subaru#s sweetness and Seishirou's absurd level of possessiveness - down pat.

[leeayre]

I love Su and Sei sometimes. I love Fu and Kam too of course, but somehow I always end up writing twice as much Sei/Su. And yet, there are so many different ways of characterizing them... Sometimes I feel frustrated that I can never get them to turn out how I want. Like I love Akk's Sei, but mine never turns out like that. ^^; *ruffles feathers* So thank you! Maybe they're not perfect, but I'm glad people think they're not wrong either. ^_^