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leeayre

Those Forsaken Ch. 11

Mar 07, 2010 10:05

Title: Those Forsaken
Rating: M
Genre: Angst/Horror
Characters: Subaru, Seishirou, Kamui, Fuuma
Summary: It all started when Subaru accidentally brought one home. Now Kamui and Subaru find themselves running for their lives, wrapped up in a fight neither could have foreseen.
Warnings: Vampirism, blood, physical abuse, nondescript nudity, etc.
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fic: those forsaken

Comments 4

rose_erato March 10 2010, 04:44:03 UTC

Seishirou is so in denial about his feelings for Subaru, but I'm sure it'll hit him soon enough :)

I just love the only way Subaru will eat is by Seishirou giving him his blood. It just shows how deeply connected they are.

leeayre March 10 2010, 17:50:55 UTC

Hey, I wasn't expecting anyone to comment this! XD It's rather outdated now. I just realized I was getting really behind updating TF on LJ. Yikes. I should get chps 12 and 13 up here too sometime.

Anyway, I don't know, Seishirou can be rather dense when it comes to emotions, but I'd definitely say that denying it or not, he does care. ^_^

Of course, it is also problematic. If anything happens to Seishirou, Subaru will starve without him. But I like that dependency. ^_~

khallandra March 17 2010, 09:31:25 UTC

I've been enjoying your fic, I like the way you weave the story and I can't say which pairing I like better :D

leeayre March 18 2010, 03:09:00 UTC

^_^ I have the same problem choosing. I like both pairings for different reasons and whenever I write one too much I can't help but go back to the other. There just must be both in the world! (Plus using both pairings simultaneously makes it great to illustrate the differences between them. *sneaky* )

Anyway, thank you. *blushes* It makes me really happy to know people are reading and interested. (the people who review/comment are appreciated in particular... ^_~) I don't always think I've done the best job, but I've definitely been learning from my mistakes. XD