Not of our world...

[lee_hawk]

When all of the dragons had woken up again, I started to talk about some things about society I sure didn't like. Like restrictions. There are far too many to talk about, but the one I disliked most was that nearly everyone had a building. In the one building I had ever been in (the party was outside) , I immediately hated the small size. And I

Comments

[basric]

I love you dragons.

[lee_hawk]

Thanks!

[myrna_bird]

Good emphasis on staying with the topic.

[lee_hawk]

Thank you!

[fortitudehigh]

I like the way you tied everything together with the repetition of the "Not... world" phrase ^_^

[lee_hawk]

Thanks!

[sweeny_todd]

beautiful :-)

[lee_hawk]

thanks!

[the_vernacular]

I really like your use of metaphor and simile; very sophisticated!

[lee_hawk]

Thank you! I do try.