Fanfiction: Shadow Hearts: Fascination

[lebensbaum]

Title: Fascination
Rating: G
Genre: Introspection
Pairing: Keith and Nina are the characters in question.
Length: Vignette
Squicks: None; Nina's of age at this time.
Spoilers: Nina's backstory with Keith, and who Keith is..
Credits: Aruze and Sacnoth own; I just play with them. Thanks to veronica_rich for the title. This is all Miko's fault for showing me

Comments

[tuplica]

Mmmm. Very nicely written. Really captures Keith's charming and graceful essence beautifully, and nicely from a young girl's perspective. Somehow, looking at that picture after reading it and remembering his image in-game and out of it just seems so terrible. (I've always hated that picture. Facially, he looks so bizarre in comparison to the other illustrations of him.) But anyway, lovely writing. Good to see you back.

[lebensbaum]

Well, nobody does Keith fanart, really, and there's not that much in-game art for me to use. Demmit. I hear you about the facial structure on that one. I'm glad you like the fic, if not the picture.

[iced_puffy]

Oh so yummy! Keith is so elegant and the way you described him is simply wonderful! ^____^
Hehehe, I felt like smiling with Nina herself about Keith's 'old fashioned' clothes and the excess ruffles at his neck...ya ya, it must have looked very girly!

[lebensbaum]

danke. It hit me while I was vollaborating with my writing partner on something else, and just demanded out. Thanks for commenting!

[nekobp]

Fwee~! How nice! What a nice ficlet, it makes me smile.
I ecspecially enjoyed the lines:

"It was if the entire earth stopped to listen; he sang with the rustle of the trees and the roll of the land beneath us. It was almost enough to make me believe in something other than God."

Perfectly executed, if you ask me ^_^

[lebensbaum]

Thanks. I figured that such a pwerful Earth class might know how to channel the land to help him... he probably didn't realise he was going to encorcell the poor girl.

Thanks for taking the time to comment; I appreciate it!

[mikononyte]

Well, that explains your sudden silence... hehehehe I'm guilty as charged I suppose.

I like it; and I chuckled, not over the frips and frills but over the "compact" ... hadn't thought of that as a physical description but you nailed it hard and it's perfect! He is a tall, languid bundle of energy just waiting to burst free.

[metalkatt]

Yes, it insisted on coming out, and if I were to try to ignore it, I'd be in big trouble. Hee, isn't he beautiful? I must do more with him. Thanks; I'm glad you like it.