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fic: what goes unnoticed (andrew/jesse)

Feb 18, 2011 20:26

Title: what goes unnoticed
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Andrew Garfield/Jesse Eisenberg
Summary: No one’s skilled enough, but Jesse, lining up his shoulder with Andrew’s, is aware of every miniscule movement, attuned to everything he does and doesn’t. (BAFTAs)
Note: Ugh, cheesy title. I tried something else with this fic. I don’t know if I like it ( Read more... )

andrew/jesse, slash, fic

Comments 29

sheep_mambo February 19 2011, 02:48:37 UTC

What I envy about your writing is your ability to put in those precise detailed words that make the stories you write all the more vivid and real.

I'm not sure why you had any sort of anxiety when it came to putting this one up. Job well done, Pookie :D.

learnthemusic February 20 2011, 23:03:48 UTC

Thank you so much, my dearest Poolie! ♥

iddothestars February 19 2011, 03:20:37 UTC

Wow. Wow wow and ouch. I don't comment a lot because I really only lurk livejournal these days, but I can't not tell out how much I love this. Its rare, Reallyoticed in these fcs, that Andrew is given much depth. Understandable, considering he's difficult to word, but you did such an excellent job at giving him an actual and believable voice. I love the codependency between the two of them, too. And the hoodie but really did make everything seem much better. Just ugh - you are wonderful. Really.

iddothestars February 19 2011, 03:23:51 UTC

Ugh and sorry for all the typos. My phone is an idiot.

learnthemusic February 20 2011, 23:05:53 UTC

Holy shit, thank you so much for commenting! I really appreciate you taking the time to do so. I'm so glad you think I gave him a believable voice because, honestly, characterizing him is such a challenge to me. Thank you, again!

yellowwolf5 February 19 2011, 11:11:29 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you're sharing this with everyone. This is brilliant! Love all those little things that Jesse notices, the detail you put into that is amazing! I love the images you paint, I can totally imagine all of it. You totally broke my heart and first and then fixed it.

This is just great! *Adds to memories* ♥

learnthemusic February 20 2011, 23:06:52 UTC

My main goal is clearly to torture your heart, love. ;)

THANK YOU SO MUCH, MY DEAR. ♥

yellowwolf5 February 20 2011, 23:07:49 UTC

*points finger accusingly* I KNEW IT!

learnthemusic February 20 2011, 23:16:30 UTC

BUTILOVEYOU

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tafidadarling February 19 2011, 15:28:45 UTC

this is absolutely beautiful. ♥

learnthemusic February 20 2011, 23:14:34 UTC

Oh, dear GOD. I can't really believe comments like this sometimes. Thanks, Emma!

tafidadarling February 21 2011, 06:02:37 UTC

That's what I get for commenting from my phone. Stupid T didn't capitalize.

Can't believe it?!!? Maria, your writing is flawless.

You're welcome! :)

learnthemusic February 21 2011, 06:12:36 UTC

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I CAN'T EVEN. I DO NOT DESERVE SUCH WORDS.

Usually I overthink and decide things can be way better than they are and this fic is one of those that I overthought and still think can be better. But you saying that really means a lot, so *smushes*

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hope_calaris February 19 2011, 22:04:23 UTC

I'm nearly speechless, because this is just so ... intense in a really good way. And I love how you organized this and the indented lines.

learnthemusic February 20 2011, 23:15:32 UTC

Oh, thank you so much!