Be My Fictional Valentine? (WIP excerpt)

[learningtoread]

In which Teagan tries to figure out what to do on her first day at her new school.

First time ever I've been bummed it's a Saturday.

I'm flipping to the next page in my handbook to see if there are any notes on what to do on the weekend when someone knocks on my door.

"Come in!" I call. If it's Catalina, maybe she can help me figure out where I'm

Comments

[edgyauthor]

Oh, this was heaps of fun! I love how shameless Teagan's crush on Colm is. And the voice...so perfect! I'm already eager to see the world from Teagan's perspective some more. :)

[learningtoread]

So much of this has been SO easy to write, because her voice is SO THERE in my head. I kept telling people, "basically I'm just writing down what she's saying."

ANNNND then they look at me like I'm nutters.

[edgyauthor]

Luckily, none of us writerly-types will think you're nuts, since we experience that, too. ;)

[laurenem6]

Ha, I love the last two lines.

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