I had to get you in the game if you're going to marry Elio, which you are BTW. I've decided that it's down to the girls for heir. Oh, and yea, he is Romance. But he wants to be a celebrity chef, so I don't think he'll be a problem
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Well I kind of read this in three bits due to all kinds of distractions at my house. So sorry in advance for the lame comment...
Now I am wondering with Shannon, does her kidnap have anything to do with her weird behavior? I'm thinking something more happened to cause a few loose screws in her head then just being jealous. But awesomely well done Jessie. I didn't expect any of that with Shannon at all.
This bit made me lol "Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum! I spy a toilet, where you put your bum!" :D
Kidnap? Are you thinking of Nicole's legacy where Shannon was kidnapped? Wow, I just realized, bad things always happen to Shannon. Well, I guess this doesn't count as a "bad thing" per se. Yea, as for Shannon, she just started getting a little big for her britches. She was upset that Nicole got Gabe, and that Nicole got all the power of being first in the world, and then a new simself was added to the mix and she had already been feeling out of sorts. Also, real Shannon suggested it and I ran with it because I needed a way to help Cain and Meridius. I'll admit that, lol.
I like hearing what your favorite parts are, because sometimes I don't expect them at all. lol, but I liked 'Strea's little rhyme as well.
Okay. Amazing. Fabulous. Perfect. Evil. THIS CHAPTER ROCKED!!
I could not help myself from smiling at all my evilness. Oh man I'm LOVING IT! The greatest part is that I would totally have said all of that to Nicole. I'm so bitchy and blunt about everything in real life too haha! Wowowowowowowwowww I really can't wait for more.
"Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum! I spy a toilet, where you put your bum!" HAHAHA! That was totally priceless.
I loved Lily's whole naive thing going on. "Jo, what the hell is going on here? I thought Nicole was married to Gabe, what is Shannon talking about?" Hahaha. :)
So yeah, the cliffhanger was PERFECTION!
THIS UPDATE IS MADE OF WIN!!! I will probably pester you everyday about the next update. :D Be prepared!
Well I'm glad it lived up to your expectations. I'm sorry I made you wait so long, and thanks for letting me make your simself a bitch, as well as nekkid. How about the makeover? Do like your Mistress of Evil outfit? lol. I searched high and low for that ya know. I'm glad you feel I did you justice, or rather simShannon. You should make that distinction you know, being the bad guy and all. lmao. Seriously, you'll have mobs of angry women...okay, no one cares that much. BUT STILL
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Hahahaha. I love my makeover! I look like a sexy evil bitch. It's perfect. :D And I love my names. "Mistress of Evil," "The Queen of Suffering," "The Overlord of Pain." Hahaha they're all so perfectly exaggerated just like I would say. :D
I forgot to mention that I loved Kia's little contradictory section. I could not stop laughing!
Ha! I wanted to get all exaggerated, I thought it would be fun. I also really enjoyed Kia's contradictory section. It was super fun. Also, after the baby was born I got to play with the baby stuff released from the store. They are super fun, and cute. :D
WOW! Another update so soon. YES! I love your little plot twists. Such a good writer you are. Can't wait to see what the pixie does with the babies and what kind of trouble Shanon brings the Shadows.
Thanks so much Holley! Shannon will, I think, add a whole new dimension of trouble to the Shadows, lol. Bet on it. :) And yea, I'm all about the plot twists. What's a story without a *gasp* twist! lol.
What an interesting chapter! Mistress of Darkness? Whow, that was so cool! But, aww, I missed Gabe's stupidity. Hope he isn't going to be out of the picture so soon.
Poor Red, maybe he can soak himself in a tub of perfume or something to mask the human scent? It always makes me sad to see people in love unable to be together.
I liked Kia's part too, it was so fun to "match" the pictures with the words! You're really creative and funny!
Don't worry, Gabe will not be out of the picture any time soon. He is simJessie's firt born..well, first and second, lol..so he'll be around. I've decided to give him and Honour immortality. I'm not ready for either of them to die. Besides, who would yell at Honour if not for Gabe? Ha!
Hmmm, you know I never thought of having Red do that so that Ben wouldn't find out. Although, with a risk to Honour's life I don't know that Red would be willing to endanger her like that. We'll have to see.
Thanks so much for the comment. Hearing you say I'm creative and funny is a huge compliment. :D
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Now I am wondering with Shannon, does her kidnap have anything to do with her weird behavior? I'm thinking something more happened to cause a few loose screws in her head then just being jealous. But awesomely well done Jessie. I didn't expect any of that with Shannon at all.
This bit made me lol "Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum! I spy a toilet, where you put your bum!" :D
Great update!
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Kidnap? Are you thinking of Nicole's legacy where Shannon was kidnapped? Wow, I just realized, bad things always happen to Shannon. Well, I guess this doesn't count as a "bad thing" per se. Yea, as for Shannon, she just started getting a little big for her britches. She was upset that Nicole got Gabe, and that Nicole got all the power of being first in the world, and then a new simself was added to the mix and she had already been feeling out of sorts. Also, real Shannon suggested it and I ran with it because I needed a way to help Cain and Meridius. I'll admit that, lol.
I like hearing what your favorite parts are, because sometimes I don't expect them at all. lol, but I liked 'Strea's little rhyme as well.
Thanks for the comment Jo :D
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Okay. Amazing. Fabulous. Perfect. Evil. THIS CHAPTER ROCKED!!
I could not help myself from smiling at all my evilness. Oh man I'm LOVING IT! The greatest part is that I would totally have said all of that to Nicole. I'm so bitchy and blunt about everything in real life too haha! Wowowowowowowwowww I really can't wait for more.
"Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum! I spy a toilet, where you put your bum!" HAHAHA! That was totally priceless.
I loved Lily's whole naive thing going on. "Jo, what the hell is going on here? I thought Nicole was married to Gabe, what is Shannon talking about?" Hahaha. :)
So yeah, the cliffhanger was PERFECTION!
THIS UPDATE IS MADE OF WIN!!! I will probably pester you everyday about the next update. :D Be prepared!
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I forgot to mention that I loved Kia's little contradictory section. I could not stop laughing!
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I love your little plot twists. Such a good writer you are. Can't wait to see what the pixie does with the babies and what kind of trouble Shanon brings the Shadows.
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Poor Red, maybe he can soak himself in a tub of perfume or something to mask the human scent? It always makes me sad to see people in love unable to be together.
I liked Kia's part too, it was so fun to "match" the pictures with the words! You're really creative and funny!
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Hmmm, you know I never thought of having Red do that so that Ben wouldn't find out. Although, with a risk to Honour's life I don't know that Red would be willing to endanger her like that. We'll have to see.
Thanks so much for the comment. Hearing you say I'm creative and funny is a huge compliment. :D
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