Fic: In Fault [PG-13]

[leanstein]

Title: In Fault
Author: leanstein  
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: McCoy/Chapel
Warnings: please highlight to read (miscarriage)
Disclaimer: Not mine, unfortunately.
Thank you's: Thanks to lullabymoon  for looking this over and her awesome cheerleading. Many thanks also to the others who looked this over when it was a work in progress.

Comments

[seren_ccd]

Oh. OH. Do you see that there? That would my heart in pieces on the floor.

This was gorgeous. Raw and aching and amazing. Very, very, VERY good.

[leanstein]

Sorry! *picks up the pieces and puts them back together*

To be honest, I did get depressed while writing this thing, lol.

Thank you so much! You are lovely! :DDDD

[secretsolitaire]

*sniffs* It makes so much sense that they'd each be blaming themselves. Very powerful.

[leanstein]

*hands tissues*

Thanks so much for reading! :DDD

[jactrades]

Oh, god. That was amazing and just tore me up completely.

This line really struck me as I was reading - it's so very Chapel and so very true: "Not with swords nor armors; they’re not princesses, kings nor knights; they have only weapons, words, ships, prime directives."

[leanstein]

I love that line too. And it really is true of the whole Starfleet experience.

Thank you so much! :DDD

[izzyfics]

*cries*

I'm a sucker for angsty hurt/comfort and this was a lovely one. I especially love the images you painted through Christine's experience (and in her head), as well as the switching back and forth between present and past.

Absolutely lovely. And yay happy ending! I'm a sucker for those too.

[leanstein]

*hands you tissues*

I'm a sucker for those too. And thank you! I was worried with the back and forth between the present and the past, but I'm so glad you liked it!

Thank you so so much! This was such a lovely comment. :)

[lullabymoon]

*ooops forgot to comment is a dipstick* UTTERLY, utterly gorgeous! I ♥ it to bits.

[leanstein]

Awww, thanks sweetie! Seriously, your cheerleading helped me a lot. ♥

Thank you. :DDD