Fic: Beneath the Surface - News/Update
I'm sorry guys, but I just realized I won't be able to post the next chapter as quickly as I've been posting the others. The showdown is quite complicated, and I want to have it finished completely before I start posting parts of it. I think it's going to be two chapters, but posting half of it tomorrow and the second half a few days later won't
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I discovered this fic only recently so that means I read most of the chapters in one sitting, which is maybe why I noticed a little detail; in chapter 11, you have Charles thinking "he most certainly had never gotten a blood transfusion", while in chapter 2 this happens: "after three transfusions of O-negative which Hank had nicked at the hospital, 'shark man' had made it through the night". Since you explicitly invite input here I thought I'd mention it.
Thank you for writing such a great story!
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Hm, guess I can solve that little problem by adding "before". Because the blood transfusions from the hospital are gonna be clean (I hope, as they're very careful about checking and double checking that kinda stuff these days).
Thank you for pointing that out. And thanks for the comment :) I'm glad you like it, and I'm always extremely flattered when someone tells me they've read all in one go. I don't think I'd have that kind of patience, tbh ^^
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Though I'd like to see some Azazel&Riptide -- or Angel, where is she in this 'verse?
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I just have one tiny request i.e. more Charles and Erik exploring the ocean together. I think that was my favourite part. Oh, I'm also the biggest sucker for 3rd parties commenting on the main characters relationship.
And more sex, that just goes without saying XD
I haven't commented before because I'm klutzy at giving praise, but I really love this story, the world building and all the characters, so yeah, just sending my love to you.
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