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leafy_girl

The Moment - Chapter 2 - Pretty Awkward

May 17, 2015 13:54

Well,scaryrei, I ended up getting into the idea of this dirty little story. Here is another chapter. This one is tame. It'll have a few chapters before I wrap it up. What an indulgence for me. Anyway, I played with Hokage Kakashi timelines and aged Sakura right before he took over. Other than that, Kakashi is possibly as OOC as I have ever made him, ( Read more... )

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scaryrei May 17 2015, 18:48:45 UTC

This is so awesome.... Totally made my day! Can't wait to see the rest unfold, I love the awkwardness and UST between them. Than you for continuing this wonderful gem!

leafy_girl May 17 2015, 19:40:37 UTC

lol. I feel guilty for doing such a dirty story between them. They can't possibly end up together in it. Anyway, I have the ending in my head. I will throw 2 or 3 more chapters out before it's done.

juju84 August 24 2015, 19:37:20 UTC

It's very intriguing to see how you gonna wrap up this story. Hope you'd finish it? There’s no such thing as too much KakaSaku for me) Good luck!

leafy_girl August 25 2015, 21:18:25 UTC

I'm going to try. I have another chapter done. Just need to throw it up. Maybe tonight.

Hi anonymous June 27 2015, 13:54:59 UTC

Best story I've read in a long time! Can't wait to see how the rest unfolds!

babikakashi September 3 2015, 05:48:58 UTC

:)! Just finished the last hirameki finally (life got busy)
And then saw this!! :) love the Canadian rye reference.

It's weird because I've been a fan for so long and now being able to interact with you. In any case, I like that you're changing it up with this. It's very leafygirl to write kakashi in that mysterious, self sacrificing way, but this is a nice contrast :)

leafy_girl September 3 2015, 11:17:42 UTC

Haha, I love rye. I figured Kakashi would too.

I secretly love bastard Kakashi. I wrote a little one shot ages ago that I have appeared to have lost somewhere where he watches Sasuke and Sakura having sex in the forest and is so disappointed by how pathetic Sasuke does that he throws a stick at them. lol! You just made me think of that.

I love when he's a selfish jerk. But he has his reasons too. The continuation of this story popped into my head as a full on fic that tries to follow canon. I was thinking I'll pop another chapter up this weekend. I didn't want to get so back into writing kakasaku but it's all i've been thinking about. I got on tumblr and there are so many pictures! It's like a wonderland of inspiration. I should have stayed in my sheltered life. haha.

babikakashi September 5 2015, 16:22:03 UTC

Haha I always forget you're a Canadian too. Been rereading some of your old stories, whenever I start, I'd keep reading until I have to go to sleep. The nostalgia and the kakasaku feels is unreal. It's too bad the fandom died :(

I definitely do like him selfish too. It's weird to see him so accommodating and going too out of his way to please Sakura (I reread poor imitation).

I haven't been on tumblr much, it never stuck because I never really followed anyone. But I can imagine how it's just making you want to see more kakasaku on the Internet. Which works for me because I'm getting back into reading fan fiction

Hope the Canadian heat isn't too much these past couple of days ;)

leafy_girl September 5 2015, 18:42:10 UTC

Oh some of my old stories are so bad. lol. I can't reread Nature or Fated because the writing gets me mad and I want to fix them. I read Lesson in Chemistry a couple of weeks ago though and it made me laugh. (and cringe because the writing was terrible). I was on a lot of painkillers when I wrote that though I can see the impact it had on my sense of humor. lol. I learned to write in one character's POV at a time after that story. Made things so much clearer. Trial and error. I can see my progress through those stories ( ... )