Comments | ldyxdavil: My Personal Chef *Rated*

ldyxdavil

My Personal Chef Rated

Feb 10, 2012 14:37

Okay, this is the second part to My Personal Chef. T___T FUCK LJ! I'M PISSED!!!

( My Personal Chef:Part 2 )

one-shot, yaoi, rated, my personal chef, yunjae

Comments 10

ouji February 10 2012, 23:49:55 UTC

for a rich kid, jaejoong isn't so snobby and he's so shy too lol. good to know yunho wants to help him, but doesn't he even think about how rich jae is? xD does the manga go this way too? the time they spent cooking is nice :) some smut, but rather nice to see them get closer :3

nice job~

ldyxdavil February 11 2012, 01:23:10 UTC

yeah, the manga goes this way too. lol..
yeah i want to add some of those things but then it will be longer and stupid lj is pissin me off with my length of writing T_T
and junsu part isn't part of the manga haha.. i jst need to add him to make it different from the manga.

asiangirl123 February 11 2012, 04:28:07 UTC

LOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL Olive oil as lube. XDDDDDDDDD Shy Jae... with a pierced nipple? Bwhaha! I've never read this manga b4! ;-; This was nice! I liked it. Thank you for the birthday gift! :DDDDDDDDD U gotta love Chef!Yun and Student!Jae

ldyxdavil February 11 2012, 05:24:23 UTC

LMAO!!! I am glad that you like this birthday gift! I thought u wouldn't be able to like it cuz I suck at writing the smut scene. T___T My muse has gone away.
But yeah... olive oil as lube haha.. manga's idea ^^
lmao! u haven't read shy jae with pierced nipple before? Me either.. lol =P that's y it is in my fic ^^
Yeah... but I somehow prefer JaeChef more than YunChef. Hahaha...

ultamatempa February 11 2012, 04:59:55 UTC

i hope jae doesn't get into trouble for going missing. it would be a shame for their cooking lessons to end ^^

ldyxdavil February 11 2012, 05:26:23 UTC

lol... that would be in your imagination if jae gets in trouble or not. however, u can read the manga... it continues until they have another lesson. however, i'm not gonna continue this since it is suppose to be jst a one-shot and for a friend's bday. ^^
but yeah.. the boy is not in trouble at all.
and of course, it will be a shame if their cookin lesson ends there, right?

donud February 11 2012, 06:27:02 UTC

sly YunHo!!!!!!!!!!!! lol!!!! YunHo you really really a sex avil! xD

ldyxdavil February 11 2012, 07:19:00 UTC

lol... thnx for reading ^^

snow_meow February 11 2012, 18:37:53 UTC

LOL
Both of them are such schemers.

ldyxdavil February 11 2012, 21:38:30 UTC

lol.. yup they are. haha..