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ldydragon7

The Bonds of Family Series~ The Final Binding

Oct 05, 2007 23:36

Title: The Final Binding
Author: Enki
Chapter: 1 of 4
Pairings: Katara/Zuko, Toph/Aang and several non-romantic relationships
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Heavily implied sex.
Summery: The Avatar has kidnapped Toph Bai Fong. Fire Lord Zuko wonders how he got stuck cleaning up the mess.
Notes: This is connected to the one-shot “If you Could Choose” and takes ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

fani October 6 2007, 13:15:23 UTC

LOVE IT! Can we get continuation?

ldydragon7 October 15 2007, 16:26:06 UTC

Yea! I'm glad you enjoyed, and YES! Chapter 2 is almost done.

yorunohime October 6 2007, 15:37:47 UTC

Oooh, this is really interesting. I love your writing style, it's very pleasant to read. The font is a bit uneasy, though.
I'm very curious about the next chapter!

ldydragon7 October 15 2007, 16:35:58 UTC

Thank you *blush* I am really glad you are enjoying it.
As for the font should it be bigger or in a different style? I copy paste from Word and that sometimes does wonky stuff to the formatting.

The next chapter is forthcoming.

yorunohime October 20 2007, 09:58:22 UTC

Aw, any time. ^_^ How could I not enjoy it?
Preferably a different style - it's not so much the letters as the quotation marks in this font that bothered me. But I can always copy the text into Word and change the font for myself, so stick to what you want, please. I know copying into LJ can get a bit strange every now and then. XD

renuki October 6 2007, 21:48:28 UTC

Bwhahahah!!! Poor Zuko. XD

*giggles* GOOOOO KATARA!

ldydragon7 October 15 2007, 16:39:05 UTC

Yeahhhhh Fire Lord Zuko's got it rough. (Just wait till Sokka shows up) *evil grin*

The Katara part was fun to write. :)

*happily accepts dark side chocolate*

renuki October 16 2007, 01:20:06 UTC

(Sokka? OH SNAP!)

Yay! :D

littletrain October 8 2007, 04:51:53 UTC

All the descriptions and details you provide are very well done. The plot of your fiction is very interesting, and leaves you curious to read more. Your ending is greatly written, and I compliment you on giving this a proper rating. Overall it’s a really good piece of work. It looks to be very promising, and I hope you choose to continue. Good job and I hope that this review helps.

ldydragon7 October 15 2007, 16:45:30 UTC

Ohhh good, I was worried about the rating. I didn't think it really warranted an R rating but there was some fooling around and heavily implied sex so I was worried about how to label it. Thank you for your review.

It will deffinatly be continued, chapter 2 is almost done (though I still have a paper to do and a Clamp fic exchange to work on as well) but it will be completed.

While you wait there is some prologue fics to this as well that are up that you can check out if you haven't already.