FIC: And Not Be Moved By You (3/3)

[ldhenson]

Third and final chapter. In which everything will either fall into place, or will all fall apart.

And Not Be Moved By You
Chapter: 3/3
Fandom: Hot Fuzz
Pairing: Angel/Danny
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All characters herein belong to their proper owners, none of which are me.
Part 1
Part 2Summary: Because sometimes with Danny, it isn't really about words

Comments

[alouette_sparra]

The ending was really just plain wow. I can't think of words to really describe it, but it's just... wow. Nice parting shot from Danny, too. It's good to see written what we all realise: Danny is not stupid.

Nice attempt by Nicholas to evade the issue. Next time he wants to pull the drunk excuse though, he shouldn't use Latin. : )

[ldhenson]

Thanks.

It's good to see written what we all realise: Danny is not stupid.

He certainly isn't, but it's a real balancing trick, to be sure. It's what makes him so intriguing to write.

[nitesh_update]

Thsi was a fantastic ending to an absolutely amazing story. Your writing blows me away every single time I see it. I love love love this fic.

[ldhenson]

Thank you. I wrote this fic like a jig-saw puzzle, as I usually do, and most of the ending was written quite early on. So I'm pleased the fic as a whole works so well for you.

[avintageidea]

aww, brilliant ending.

[ldhenson]

Thanks much.

[prairiestar]

oh *hooray* - I was hoping you'd post this before I left town and internet access for the rest of the week. I'll try to come up with better feedback later, but for now:

Gorgeously hot and perfect! Danny's all "grrr" and Nicholas is all Nicholas-like... :P My words don't work right now, I'm too happy with what you wrote.

'You shouldn't be.' He doesn't lift his head; the sight of the wall opposite is about all that he can handle right this instant. There's so much more than that, but the words won't come so soon, and he hopes Danny understands this much for now: what he couldn't say, what he still can't say. He steadies his voice, repeats it. 'You shouldn't be.'

It is obvious that I am way too ga-ga in love with this pairing, because the above section actually choked me up a little.

[ldhenson]

Glad you enjoyed!

As for Angel's reaction that you quoted above...yeah. Their encounter in the locker-room changed a lot of things, but it's far from fixing everything. Thank god Danny's who he is...

I'll try to come up with better feedback later

Bring it on! I always appreciate your insights.

[acidpenguin46]

Wow, that was beautiful. You really have such a brilliant way of writing these characters. I loved this, and the kiss was...guh! Great work :)

[ldhenson]

You really have such a brilliant way of writing these characters.

Love to hear that, because they're really what's at the heart of it.