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Puppy-dog Peristance (3/3)

Mar 22, 2010 22:56

TITLE: Puppy-dog Persistance
PAIRING: Merlin/Arthur
RATING: NC-17
WORDS: Overall 12,000 (*face palm*)
GENRE: Modern AU, romance, slash
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing.

WARNINGS: Underage - depending on where you're from (Merlin's 17), explicit sexitimes

SUMMARY: When Arthur finds out that his one-night stand is only 17 years old, he does everything in his power ( Read more... )

fandom: merlin, arthur/merlin, fanfic

Comments 79

archaeologist_d March 23 2010, 01:35:51 UTC

It was well done. Merlin was a bit stalkery, bad Merlin, bad! But he was also like the puppy that would follow you home. I liked how Arthur finally realized that he was in a relationship.

lcacbc March 23 2010, 03:04:20 UTC

The puppy thing was just what I was going for, so YAY!

laurapetri March 23 2010, 02:14:16 UTC

This was too ADORKABLE!!!!!! ♥ ♥

lcacbc March 23 2010, 03:05:22 UTC

Thank you! :)

cordeliasmarz March 23 2010, 02:47:32 UTC

WOW!!
I love it!!!

I can tell already that this is going to be one of my "classics" that I read loads
And I have to tell you that list is pretty exclusive

I laughed so ridiculously much at this:

FUCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK. Arthur was in a relationship with someone that took dating advice from Cosmo magazine. He was utterly doomed.

Like SO ridiculously much.

Genius.

The whole story was just so good!
You did it all perfect!

I'm 18 (so what would I know, right?) but I thought you got mature!Arthur spot-on and I loved his internal struggle and DENIAL
And Merlin was SO CUTE!! And oddly not actually that annoying considering that.. he was.. well, annoying. He was so lovable you didn't care that he was like that! You did him really well in that way - just right :)

Anyway, enough flattery
It's bordering on sickening even if it is deserved ;)

P.S. Just a couple of bits my pedantic mind picked up on:

In the first line of Part 2 you wrote "would of" instead of "would have" or "would've ( ... )

cordeliasmarz March 23 2010, 02:48:35 UTC

P.P.S. Totally friending you

cordeliasmarz March 23 2010, 03:14:30 UTC

P.P.P.S. Sorry to comment spam you but I've just been a'browsin' your past entries and I'm a little aghast at the fact I haven't friended you before!

Domestic Bliss?

The Pornoverse?

Those two are reason enough alone for me to be chomping at the bit (sorry, I don't even like that phrase so I don't know why I used it - especially when discussing your brilliance. I regret using it now. But can't find it in me to delete..) for more and pressing the friending key (those should exist for emergencies.. a keyboard shortcut at the very least..) violently right away!

So uh..

Bye!

Back to perusing your genius..

lcacbc March 23 2010, 03:11:02 UTC

Wow, what an amazing comment! Thanks!
I'm so glad Merlin came off like that, cos I wanted him to be irriating, but in a cute way, so people could understand why Arthur was attracted to him XD

Oh, and sorry about the grammar fails, it's not really my strong point ;) I didn't bother getting the story beta'd (cos I'm lazy like that) and I obviously skipped over some typos. Honestly, I'm surprised there's not a whole lot more! I'll go back and change them XD

P.S Friending you back :)

nyxelestia March 23 2010, 03:02:09 UTC

Haha, excellent. I love Arthur freaking out and Merlin being so persistent. (The puppy title was great. :D) Awesome fic!

lcacbc March 23 2010, 03:13:52 UTC

You like the title? Really, lol? I was *head desking* as soon as I thought of it! But thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed!

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lcacbc March 23 2010, 12:56:06 UTC

What is Merlin without a cameo from Leon? XDD I'm glad you liked!