Cellmate - Chapter 11

Dec 19, 2009 21:06

TITLE: Cellmate (11/14)
PAIRING: Arthur/Merlin
RATING: NC-17
GENRE: Modern AU
WORDS: This part is 4400
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing

SUMMARY: Merlin Emrys is dead. No really. He's just called the most powerful prisoner in jail a prat. A prat he just happens to be cellmates with.

Italics this chapter is for the flashback. Just to point out the obvious. XD

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cellmate, fandom: merlin, arthur/merlin, fanfic

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spiceblueeyes December 19 2009, 22:24:25 UTC
No, they were supposed to kiss AND make up! Not kiss and stay apart, silly boys.

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lcacbc December 19 2009, 22:45:01 UTC
They'll reach an understanding next chapter ;) Thanks for commenting!

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tetsubinatu December 19 2009, 22:24:30 UTC
Oh those kisses!

Thanks for the update! Mmmmmm-mmmm.

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lcacbc December 19 2009, 22:46:56 UTC
You can never have too many kisses XD

And I <3 your icon! I was just gazing at it for like 5 minutes, completely mesmirized ;)

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tetsubinatu December 19 2009, 23:59:33 UTC
I adore it! It's one of several icons that ifyouweremine made after I told her that I kept coming back to stare at a gif she posted. It's up for sharing at:
http://ifyouweremine.livejournal.com/164823.html

The original, larger gif is in this post, for your viewing pleasure, but the post is quite large so don't click if that's going to be a problem. This gif is about a third of the way down the page:
http://ifyouweremine.livejournal.com/163933.html

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lcacbc December 20 2009, 11:09:28 UTC
OOOOO! Now I can stare all day long! Thanks XD

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ldycat1170 December 19 2009, 22:28:46 UTC
I liked the back story of where the plan was going. And I am kinda impressed with Merlin for resisting Arthur when he really wants to be with him.
If you haven't gotten a beta offer, I would be happy to look through it.

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lcacbc December 19 2009, 22:49:28 UTC
Merlin wont resist for long ;)

Yeah, if you could look through it that would be awsome! I'm not really sure how the beta thing works, but if you can send me the corrections for the old chapters whenever you want, that'd be good :)

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dianadisaster December 19 2009, 22:34:52 UTC
Don't worry, hun, the plan made perfect sense! The flashback turned out fine, although I panicked a bit at first thinking that I had skipped a chapter because I couldn't remember what the guys were talking about. But that's more to do with not reading it all at once, I think.

I love how you're handling Arthur and Merlin, that Arthur is starting to hint at deeper feelings without getting too sappy too quickly. It takes time to change one's habits, man-sluttery included, lol.

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lcacbc December 19 2009, 22:55:38 UTC
I'm glad Arthur isn't coming out too sappy, cos that would be a complete 180 to how he started :) I hope his character is progressing slowly XD Or that's what I'm going for anyway! Thanks for commenting!

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eosrose December 20 2009, 02:00:14 UTC
I look forward to each new chapter... Why do you always leave us hanging?! So cruel! *sobs*

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lcacbc December 20 2009, 10:50:17 UTC
To get you reading the next chapter ;) Sorry! XD

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