This was a gorgeous sequel. I loved every moment of it. ♥
BTW, um. You might want to change this:
I was babbling out of nervousness, but he stood there undaunted, stoic, as I rambled. "Because I have always loved you, but I was too chicken to admit it, and then you were always there for me and I was too selfish to let you go, and--- I know this sounds as an excuse, but you can talk to my mother, she can tell you I'm not lying, she knows and she supports me and she thinks you feel something for me as well, and now I do too, because you wouldn't have stormed out of my house like you did yesterday without having a good reason, and not because you freaked out or anything-
It confused me, especially since you wrote this in Cook's POV and..yeah. :3 Please don't be offended!
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BTW, um. You might want to change this:
I was babbling out of nervousness, but he stood there undaunted, stoic, as I rambled. "Because I have always loved you, but I was too chicken to admit it, and then you were always there for me and I was too selfish to let you go, and--- I know this sounds as an excuse, but you can talk to my mother, she can tell you I'm not lying, she knows and she supports me and she thinks you feel something for me as well, and now I do too, because you wouldn't have stormed out of my house like you did yesterday without having a good reason, and not because you freaked out or anything-
It confused me, especially since you wrote this in Cook's POV and..yeah. :3 Please don't be offended!
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