Comments | lazulisong: [oct 25] [kh-com/2] [your unknown color] second life

lazulisong

[oct 25] [kh-com/2] [your unknown color] second life

Oct 25, 2006 23:32

This was originally written for Summer Flinging but I added more stuff and cut out some stuff, and am sorry to say it still kind of smells of poo ( Read more... )

31 days, kh

Comments 10

rubyd October 26 2006, 06:41:02 UTC

I LIKE YOUR WURDS.

Seriously, Riku and Namine are so sweet here. Even a witch needs a knight, too.

lazulisong October 26 2006, 08:32:24 UTC

they're like the crazy couple that nobody expects to keep together until fifty years later they're still there.

also bff. also I bet he lets her play with his hair.

unedited October 26 2006, 07:21:42 UTC

♥

lazulisong October 26 2006, 08:15:35 UTC

six months later I'm still bitter that they sunk my fucking ship.

RIKU/NAMI 4EVR.

chickosaurusrex October 26 2006, 07:30:32 UTC

I love how you take little snapshots of a story--snippets of conversation, or small actions--and they all build-up into something so nice.

No, really, I think you could just have a bunch of snippets about walking the dog, or burning some toast, and then put them all together and I'd read it and find it incredibly meaningful and touching. I think that makes you some sort of writerly awesome. :P

woodburner October 26 2006, 10:28:09 UTC

I've never played KH but I really liked that. ♥

One thing though. "Blackberries like amethysts"? But. Amethysts are very light purple and blackberries are almost black? Or are there like, just really weird ass berries here. 'Cause I mean, Squenix, not like it would be unusual.

vampireborg October 26 2006, 17:19:37 UTC

My amethyst ring is very dark. Also, gem quality amethyst tends to be much lighter in color than amethyst crystals can be.

woodburner October 26 2006, 22:35:59 UTC

Well, I guess gems can always be different shades and colors but. People do generally think of the light purple kind when they think "amethyst."

moonsheen October 26 2006, 16:45:10 UTC

SO MUCH YES