For some reason, the first thought that popped into my head when I read this was "ow". I can't really explain it, and it's not really a bad kind of 'ow', either. It's sort of a breathless, slight-wince type of 'ow'?
...And I can't translate it, so, um... Just take my word for it that it's not anything bad? ^^;;;;;
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Favourite line: The other creeping warily up, wanting a friendly hand but never expecting more than a kick. Because that is Ritsuka.
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...And I can't translate it, so, um... Just take my word for it that it's not anything bad? ^^;;;;;
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Ah, I love the imagery. Wonderful work.
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