Aug 17 / I am inside someone who hates me / LOVELESS / Soubi, Ritsuka, Seimei

[lazulisong]

Day/Theme: I am inside someone who hates me
Series: LOVELESS
Character/Pairing: Soubi, Ritsuka, Seimei
Rating: G

Comments

[satora_chan]

Beautifully written.

Favourite line: The other creeping warily up, wanting a friendly hand but never expecting more than a kick. Because that is Ritsuka.

[kiyoshi_chan]

For some reason, the first thought that popped into my head when I read this was "ow". I can't really explain it, and it's not really a bad kind of 'ow', either. It's sort of a breathless, slight-wince type of 'ow'?

...And I can't translate it, so, um... Just take my word for it that it's not anything bad? ^^;;;;;

[white_aster]

Oh mew. <3 There needs to be more GOOD Loveless fic. ^___^

[measuringlife]

Lovely~ I think you captured Soubi's 'voice' wonderfully, his viewpoint seems to fit right in as it would in canon, and stray!cat Ritsuka? Oh love. ♥

[lazulisong]

I love you too and I owe you a great deal of LOVE and possibly A DRABBLE because you just made me win my bet with Becky. ♥

[measuringlife]

Whee~ ♥ ^_^ What kind of bet is this? (Is it ok that I ask? Merely out of curiosity)

[measuringlife]

Er, it didn't sign me in for some reason o_o *pokes LJ*

[__5hin]

His ears look like black velvety butterflies.

Ah, I love the imagery. Wonderful work.