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[life_insideout]

I'm not sure if Fanfic100 is still being moderated, but I signed up to write fanfiction for Lawrence of Arabia. I haven't been approved, but I was just so excited to get started that I dove right in. The quality of fics for this fandom is amazing and truthfully I'm not sure of the quality of my entry. I rarely write fanfiction, and this was my

Comments

[ziggythewalrus]

I'd enjoy reading longer fic from you. Thank you for posting.

[carmarthen]

I like this a lot--a nice fill-in scene, and it's great to see someone writing in this fandom again! Lovely use of language, and the setting feels very vivid.

There are a couple of sentences that read a bit confusingly, and also some missing commas, so you might want to consider a beta for longer pieces.

[fred_god_of]

This is excellent, I like the look into Lawrence's head.