Comments | lawandorder100: Loud Challenge

mabsymango in lawandorder100

Oct 15, 2008 22:05

Title: A Noise Within
Flavor: L&O CI
Words: 100
Rating: PG

( A Noise Within )

Comments 13

western_skies October 16 2008, 04:04:39 UTC

Aurgh, this is painfully amazing. Such a lot in this tiny amount of words. Wonderful.

mabsymango October 16 2008, 15:18:29 UTC

thanks! next time i need to flip the script and get bobby all angsty over eames.

lozziecap October 16 2008, 08:27:19 UTC

That is superb. Thank you, thank you. My friend's list is full of little gifts for me this morning.

mabsymango October 16 2008, 15:18:42 UTC

glad i could contribute.

thanks!

scriberestagere October 16 2008, 11:07:43 UTC

Most excellent.

mabsymango October 16 2008, 15:18:50 UTC

thanks!

squarey October 16 2008, 12:56:40 UTC

Incredible 100 words with a very visceral image.
Though, strangely I am hungry for rice krispies.

mabsymango October 16 2008, 15:19:15 UTC

thanks!

i like mine with marshmallows.

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mabsymango October 16 2008, 15:19:36 UTC

i am glad you liked it.

thank you!