Labor Challenge

Sep 03, 2008 09:54

Mike Logan gingerly flexed his hand and winced.

“Careful there,” the doctor warned.  "Voila!” she said, finishing her expert taping of two of his fingers.  “You’ll be back to fighting shape in no time, Detective.” She smiled.  “Busting perps and cuffing criminals.”

He doubted it.  The Punch Heard ‘Round Manhattan had doomed his career faster ( Read more... )

author: mabsymango, mothership, mike logan

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mabsymango September 4 2008, 03:29:56 UTC
thanks! he always did have a way with words. glad i could do him some justice.

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fearciuil September 3 2008, 15:19:54 UTC
Nice! Second what sipman said--very Logan.

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mabsymango September 4 2008, 03:30:22 UTC
i am going to miss that guy. thanks!

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squarey September 3 2008, 15:28:38 UTC
AH-HA! I love, love, love this.
Oh - and Dr. Santelli - perfection. I need an IAB fix. Please, please, please... post more Gus (and her sisters).
And the flashback to the shot heard round the world (oh, the punch heard round manhattan ;) superb.

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mabsymango September 4 2008, 03:32:30 UTC
aww, thanks for your words of encouragement. of course, back at this point in time, gus would still be stripping in vice and julia would have been a resident or something, but it's plausible she would have been on hand to tape up his owie. santelli roses!

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bre_the_writer September 3 2008, 15:39:35 UTC
I love that "Punch Heard 'Round Manhattan" line. Actually, I love the whole thing. Great job.

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mabsymango September 4 2008, 03:33:13 UTC
and it was, right? and beyond to staten island even. thanks!

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woffproff September 3 2008, 20:48:02 UTC
Love it!

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mabsymango September 4 2008, 03:33:29 UTC
thanks!

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