"Smooth" Challenge

Jul 20, 2008 20:54

It was like melted butterscotch, dribbled slowly over delectably soft soft-serve.

No.

The finest merlot, aged to red perfection and poured gently over a river of molten dark chocolate.

No, that wasn’t it either.

It was a whisper of silk brushed ( Read more... )

author: mabsymango, ron carver, ci

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Comments 15

squarey July 21 2008, 01:06:56 UTC
Hot and sticky and smooooooooth.
(velvety caress and butterscotch and RON CARVER!)
whoa. I think I need an icey beverage.

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mabsymango July 21 2008, 02:14:53 UTC
holy crap it's carver!

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fearciuil July 21 2008, 01:58:37 UTC
LOL! There are some men's voices one could listen to all day....

Very nicely done. :D

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mabsymango July 21 2008, 02:16:30 UTC
sooooo smooooooooth.

thanks!

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bre_the_writer July 21 2008, 11:25:39 UTC
Yeah, I think that about covers it. I love the "getting-back-to-business" part.

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mabsymango July 22 2008, 01:32:58 UTC
carver has the smoothest voice in the DA's office...

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havers July 21 2008, 14:13:33 UTC
Wohoooo...I am feeling hot.

Thanks

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mabsymango July 22 2008, 01:34:10 UTC
so's the judge!

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mabsymango July 22 2008, 01:34:34 UTC
awww shucks! thanks!

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